Open Poetry #18 |
2000th Post......I Stand In Awe |
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I Stand In Awe I stand In awe. As I gaze at the distant icy blue peaks of the majestic mountains. It's crown of white, sparkling, diamond studded snow encrusted peaks high in the sky. With haunting shades of royal, purple and cerulean blue. To me it speaks. My heart skips a beat. I am overcome with heart throbbing emotions. Above the azure sky, with streaks of baby pink and coral, are clouds, puffy, white and shaded with colors of the sky, It enraptures me. The misty, magical valley below filled with majestic trees, Their leaves the colors of honey, caramel, cranberries, pumpkin and kiwi Sparkle in the golden molten sunlight, it's warming rays pouring down on this ethereal scene. I stand In awe. Then I see the waterfall, luminescent water cascading down with bits of foam and bubbly liquid of the Gods, Creating it's own mysticism as the water streams down to splash against the hot rocks and huge boulders, Whose colors sparkle, as gems of topaz, quarts, citrine, emerald And the richness of silver and gold. I am amazed. Along the cool green velvet edge of this hypnotizing lake of aqua, sapphire, and indigo, Are masses of colorful flowers of every color, ruby, pink, blue, yellow, gold and violet. The sweet fragrance of flowers wafting through the morning air reaches my nose, tantalizing my senses. The sweet scent of heather and lavender with spikes of purple and lilac blooms calms me. I stand in awe of Gods creation. I am humbled at this vision. Floria [This message has been edited by strbbux (02-06-2002 10:28 AM).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You made me see it all so clearly, and so beautiful!! Congrats on your 2000 th post!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Floria~ This is just exquisite ! ! Poetically adorned in vivid colors~ Congratulations on the quality of your 2000+ posts~ It is a pleasure to have you in this wonderful circle of poets and friends~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Sea for your kind words and congrats, gosh, it came up so fast, caught me by surprise. LOL... floria Floria |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Floria,congratulations onyour 2000th post.What a beautiful poem to commemorate! Juanita |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Marge for your thoughts and congrats, and oh yes, I am happy to be here, Great friends. So nice to know you can come in and post and feel so comfortable. I thank you kindly. Hmmm I would have preferred this centered but I forgot to hit the tiny box. LOL.... floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Juanita thank you, the 2000th came up so fast I almost missed it. LOL, thanks for the angel. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! WOW!!! Ooohhhhh...this is sooooooo breathtakingly gorgeous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You paint colors of beauty with your wonderful words alwyas, sweet friend, CONGRATULATIONS ON 2000 AND MANY MORE TO COME!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Congratulations sweet lady..so glad you have joined us at Passions..Hugs.. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I loved the beautiful imagery!Very nice 2000th! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Pretty, pretty, pretty! Congrats on your 2000th! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is beautiful and YOU are a wonderful person and deserve to be here Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am humbled by the talent He has given you that I can see clearly, through your words, the majestic beauty your eyes see. BRAVO!!!!Congradulations on your 2000th. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
strbbux - I am in awe of your vision. Beautiful imagery, and writing... BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Floria...I stand in awe too! You painted a beautiful word picture for your 2000th..Congratulaions and thank you for your replies and poetry. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Noah thank you so much, You are one that inspires me with your wonderful words. floria Victoria, thank you so much. I always enjoy your words.floria Sopossom thanks, your work always puts a smile one my face floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Auguste, thank you so much, I love reading your wonderful words. floria Irish Rose, thank you so much, and I am so happy to be here with all of you great people. floria Startime thank you so much, and He has certainly gifted you. floria Bill, I do thank you, I also enjoy so much reading your work. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Martie, thank you so much, for your kind words, and I always look forward to reading your inspiring words. floriaNoah thank you so much, You are one that inspires me with your wonderful words. floria Floria |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
all of your poetry is so lovely... and this gem showcases your gift of imagery, as well as your love of nature...you paint its beauty with your words. This is a stunning portait of color and vision. Congrats on your milestone... It does come up fast when we love poetry. Well done poetess Floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Congrats on 2000! Your discriptions were so pretty and it brought your poem to life. great job |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are such a nice addition to Passions and this was certainly a stirring poem for your 2000th post. Congratulations, and keep on posting! ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
floria, Congratulations on your 2000th!!!!! And your poetry just gets better and better and better! O Boy are you writting superbly. This poem is just outstanding. So vivid I see right into your soul. MMMMmmmmm. What a beautiful sweet soul, I see. I see God and all of your poetry, right there in your soul, filled with so much love. So wonderful. Keep writing for us, floria. Keep writing. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Janet Marie, thank you so much for all your kind words. I am not sure I deserve the name poetess, but I sure do thank you for it floria Rose petal, thank you so much for your kind reply. floria Mysteria I do thank you and I am so happy to be here with all you fine poets. floria Thank you so much kind Newell and I see Him in yours. His love does shine through doesn't it? I wouldn't want to hide it. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what fantastic imagery in this piece, Floria. I stand in awe of this poem...and I have watched as your writing has evolved so beautifully here at passions. Congratulations on your 2000 post. You must never leave your computer...you got to 2000 so fast.....wow! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHAHA that is too funny, well yes I do leave my computer from time to time. It wouldnt fit in our bed. haha, and I take cAre of my six year old grandchild, take him to school, and such, and I leave my PC on all day, and just pop in and out,. LOL,,,thanks for all the replies Lyra, You are really fun to have around, I loved your last poem on womans time of the month..LOL.. .floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 2000th POST!!! And a beautifully written piece too! We're so lucky to have you here at Passions! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Floria~ It is I who stands in awe of this piece! What a beautiful write of faith and exploration, it's definately a keeper ~Congratulations on your 2000th post~ Indeed, Passions is a better because you are here And, thank you for always supporting my poetry - it's greatly appreciated. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Floria You have painted for us a masterpiece from your wonderful tapestry of words. This was beautiful. Congratulations on your 2000th post! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Enchantress you are too kind, thank you . I am lucky to be here. floria Melissa, thank you so much, And your poetry is so easy to support as it is such a joy to read. floria Sue, thank you so much, Nice seeing you on here, I usually miss you and have to go looking for your work. floria Floria |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely beautiful imagery! Congratulations on post number 2000!! Gosh time flies when you're having fun! |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
beautiful poem and congatulations...2000posts....WOW...wonders if I'll make it there |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Perfect 2000 post, congrats. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Floria darling girl OHH WOW I love this darling girl utterly utterly love it girl this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you Fabulous writing darling girl utterly fabulous You Know I LOVE THIS don't you? You're imagery is outstandingly good, it's wonderful Well Done Floria 2 0 0 0 Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Floria~ Congrats on 2000, heres to 2000 more... and what a stunning piece you have posted in honor...Lovely work....) Lauren~ Step through the |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Floria - A beautiful picture of a place I think we would all like to view with our own eyes. Nicely done. Dave |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Floria...this got hidden somewhere on me.. Congratulations on your 2000th...Wow... and wow on the poem...so visual... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Floria, Just think of... "Stepping on shore and finding it heaven Touching a hand and finding it God Breathing fresh air and finding it celestial Waking up inglory and finding it home" It seems I just did! And contrats on 2,000. This ain't a race you know. Good grief! Thrilled your here and look forward to many more. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Poetdevine, thank you so much for your congrats. floria Brianbodry, you sure will make it, I love reading your work. floria Walker thanks so very much floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Marsha you are too sweet, and you have no reason to be "green" Ha haha as you are a great poetess...thanks much floria Greeneyes, what can I say but thanks, love your work. floria GenX thank you, I hope I took you there floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus thank you so much,,, I enjoy reading all your wonderful romantic poems, I am a bit behind but will catch up. LOL floria Larry, this is so so sweet,,Oh well I know it isnt a race LOLOL but once I get on here, and start reading, I cant choose which I want to read and which not.......so I read all......LOL am a bit behind now,,thanks larry floria Floria |
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