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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-02-06 02:37 AM


            for brevity
    
              
            In my penchant for brevity
            I sometimes wonder if
            I have left you with only the chisel
            and the hammer
            having already chipped the granite block
            into nothingness
            its essence rendered to mere
            dust motes in the air
            its soul chipped away
            to pieces no one can recognize.
  
    
      
      
            ©   020502
  



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1 posted 2002-02-06 03:07 AM


This reminds me of someone I know...sometimes it's what is left unsaid that is the most fascinating!
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2 posted 2002-02-06 10:52 AM


Krawdad

On the artist's tools you will find the sweat of inspiration, something you might not notice otherwise.  

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3 posted 2002-02-06 11:08 AM


I like this very much....
reminds me of my hubby

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4 posted 2002-02-06 12:08 PM




WOW!!! I LOVE IT!!! Chiseling away at the block of every thought until the most meaningful message of all is found within, like true gold! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, your words are always a delight to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krawdad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-06 12:15 PM


*sigh* but in the chipping away a new soul is born and it's beauty is seen by all...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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