Surprise, You're Dead II (black humour guys!)

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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-02-05 06:56 PM

Definitely not your average guest
he comes to you on nightly quests;
you open your door to his hollow knocks
and he whisks by at the midnight clock!

You ask him who he wants to see
and feel the urgency to take a pee
from under the hooded shroud appears a void
as you stare blankly, there's no face to avoid.

He knows when and where to strike
your table guests feel no urgency for flight
but there must be someone whose heart will tick its last
the walking cloak has appeared to complete his task.

Some poets find these topics morbid
others think that I must be going sordid
if I had to worry about what to write for them
ha! I'd rather wait for a visit from our friend

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-05-2002 06:59 PM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-05 07:31 PM

this would actually be really good for Halloween

fun post......

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

2 posted 2002-02-05 07:40 PM

Some poets find these topics morbid
others think that I must be going sordid
if I had to worry about what to write for them
ha! I'd rather wait for a visit from our friend

You are right...we write what we feel and what we need...it's not as important that it touches others as much as it heals us!!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-05 07:40 PM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo hauntingly delightful, sweet friend, your words always make me smile! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!