Doth Thee Not Know (Duet with a muse)

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-05 05:05 PM

Doth thee not know feelings of this, thy heart?
That I covet thy shadow, thee being mine desire
Ye o’er night in found dreams love doth start.
For thy yearning of love mine arms seek fire.

Sweeter than the dream should be
Forsaking all ties in reverie
No one bids away these, my thoughts
As nothing but your desire is sought

Into the fortnight of the moment, thou art here.
Into the arms of thy grace, my soul doth now rest.
‘Pon set of silver moon, mine eyes shed tear.
Lo, but thee have mine all, ‘gainst thy own breast.

Seek me for I am your real!
Find me beneath your fingers’ feel
Hold me tight against your chest,
And slay the silence that we test

Thee art not mine to take, lest thee desire me.
Thy wish becomes my duty, for thou art free.
Thy beauty doth blind my eyes, wilt thee know
For blood from my veins rush for thee, ‘tis so.

You speak of freedom, ‘tis my choice to choose,
From thee, my love, bid me not abuse
Thy thought, as to whether I stay, or go,
For as you would have it, may it be so!

Wilt the orb of night set before thy love find?
Doth thee awake before thy dreams entwined?
Can Ye not feel the fervor of mine own heart?
In slumber I wait, mine own dreams do start.

And thy dream, thy wish, thy true blood red
Finds this soul, thy love, within thy bed;
In fantasy seek thy reverie
Here and now, within thy heart of me.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-02-05 05:11 PM

WOW!!!!BRAVO!!!!A MASTERPIECE...PERFECTION...I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! WHOEVER YOUR MUSE IS THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND SHE HAS DONE AN AMAZING JOB BLENDING WITH YOU IN LOVE AND PASSION. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-02-05 05:12 PM

A familiar sounding muse

Interesting write.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-05 06:15 PM

BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS WONDERFUL, OUR MODERN SHAKESPEARE SINGS WITH A MUSE OF LIGHT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) This is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, your quill paints with the blood of a true romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-02-05 06:19 PM

Barry & Muse~

This is outstandingly beautiful....WOW!!!

I love the form in which is is written...you have done good...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-02-05 06:21 PM

"Seek me for I am your real!
Find me beneath your fingers’ feel
Hold me tight against your chest,
And slay the silence that we test"

so gorgeous!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-02-05 06:57 PM

Karen...wow...glad you liked this....a fun
write with my muse..both of us enjoyed it..
I am glad you enjoyed it also...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-02-05 06:57 PM

Thanx Interloper...and an enjoyable write
with an interesting muse...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-02-05 06:59 PM

Thank you Noah...and I am sure my muse thanx
you as well...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-02-05 07:00 PM

Thanx Lauren...and it was an enjoyable write,
complemented well by a talented muse...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-02-05 07:01 PM

Sea...Sue....thanx much...that part of the
poem that you mention was not mine...but I
thought it was a beautiful stanza as well..

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-02-05 07:59 PM

Magnus, wow, you are just doing so well witht his style. lovely poem.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-02-05 09:32 PM

Looks like the two of you had a very good time with this duet...keep it up!

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