Open Poetry #18 |
Blanket Of Death You Will Have To Wait |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Blanket of death Cast me up and down your spine Let me chill in your breathe To only reawaken to my dream To fly before you in wings of ecstasy In boundless horizons I scour the magic haze That casts spells in the imagination Creating images of spellbound verse In castles that cling on the edge Of endless pits leading to my voids In lands troubled with over grown vines That cling together to capture their prey To devour them into the darkness of no doors To erase the beauty underneath From the time it took to create it Arriving in a place so hot that you cannot sweat The mind become well done in the prepared feast But the juices within refuse to steam out To be left simmering in the minds thought Of fantasies so cool you are internally refreshed So blanket keep trying to wrap me up in deceit I will wrestle with my ambitions As you create those endless negative visions I will absorb them to understand them Letting the diarrhea do the rest I will dance before you to puzzle you so In whirlwinds that will keep reaching for more So much that the stench of death With its piercing inner eye will be blown away Until my creations will please the creator of all D.Lester Young (02/05/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) http://www.writtenbyme.com/userprofile.php?name=davelyoung1 http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
D.Lester, in dreams and visions you paint the path of truth. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew! Powerful stuff! I don't know whether I understood all of it but I sure enjoyed reading it! Some great inner strength written about here! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I am always impressed by the way you express life in so many ways, yes, I believe that He tests us to become the loving people we are born to be, and our time will come once we find true happiness and accomplishments to celebrate! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous writing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Lester, this is just a wonderful write. Yes many questions from many people.There is dark evil in the world and there is the Love of God, everyone has a choice. and I love this poem. floria Floria |
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