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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-04 02:55 PM

Catalina moon,
lovliest sight
in the heavens,
reminds me of
my Sandra
torn between
California sunshine
and New Hampshire snow.
I remember
the start of a
smile
wrinkling
the corner
of those
luscious lips
invitingly,
intriguingly,
maddeningly.
Then the
blinding flash
of full-blown
smile.
Dazzlingly white
with
ruby surround
and
when she came
to me
offering
her lips
I melted.
Such is the
magnitude
of her
smile
and the
softness
of her
ruby lips.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-04 02:58 PM

(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...I'll bet our sweet Sandra will blush once she reads this, this is soooooooo cute and soooooo beautiful! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Your words are bound to make her smile and giggle, just as they make me smile! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, Doctor Love, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-02-04 03:00 PM

WOW!!! wait.. ::sigh:: WOW!!!

This is wonderful and sooo very right for her

I enjoyed this read ... muchly

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-02-04 04:07 PM

This is a beauty! (as is she!) I thought it clever how you turned what I assumed would be a metaphorical smile for our Sandra, into a lovely description of a smile...works for me too!

<-----see?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-04 04:12 PM

Interloper, if this doesn't make her break out into a big grin then I don't know what we'll do with her! Go find her and tickle her, maybe? Lovely write and I'm sure smiling!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-02-04 04:17 PM

Me thinks she is gonna like this one...
Well done...

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-02-04 04:19 PM

How wonderful!!!!!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2002-02-04 04:23 PM

this is so nice!! How could she not smile after this?!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2002-02-04 04:50 PM

*sigh* Oh my ....she is going to more than just smile when she reads this poem...she will jump into your arms and give you that big kiss....BRAVO!!! I love it..**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-02-04 06:33 PM

Very nice work here and a beauty of a poem that I'm sure will bring our Sandra a big smile.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-02-04 06:37 PM

Interloper~

Very lovely....you said it perfectly...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

11 posted 2002-02-04 07:55 PM

Beautiful!! I will return to read her comments on this one.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-02-04 08:36 PM

Theres only one problem with this poem, Interloper.
I'm pouting with jealousy!

I wish someone would write something like this for me.....but I'm just a striped rodent.
Great job.....and I'm sure Sandra will be absolutely thrilled!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-02-05 07:51 AM

WOW I'm sure you meant to write this about Valentina, but I love it. Thanks, I realy needed a smile today. They are generally rare these days.
Your writing always brings one out though.
Sandra/catalina,valentina

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

14 posted 2002-02-05 08:31 AM

this is neat, she will like this for sure, oh, I see she already did! Very kind of you to post this for her.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-02-05 08:55 AM

Interloper,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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