The Touch of You (duet with Greeneyes)

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Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

0 posted 2002-02-04 01:43 AM

Greeneyes
&
Larry C

I remember a
touch we shared
exposing my feeling
in raw emotion

Shocked and delighted,
not knowing
where
it came from

It is the trace I
leave upon your skin
the brush of my
lips to yours
the stars that dangle
against midnights hue

A trace which
leaves a warm
shadow
of the moon
upon my heart

On natures endless
symphony, of summer
winds breezing gently
a perfect harmony

Reminding me
some raw emotions
are definitely
worth
reliving

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2002-02-04 01:56 AM

Very good you two!!

"It is the trace I
leave upon your skin
the brush of my
lips to yours
the stars that dangle
against midnights hue

A trace which
leaves a warm
shadow
of the moon
upon my heart"

My favorite part...!!!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-02-04 02:07 AM

amusemi,
Thanks so much. Free verse...who knew?

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-02-04 03:05 AM

Cool u two.. super cool.. an excellent merge

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-02-04 03:09 AM

Enjoyed this...James

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

5 posted 2002-02-04 03:44 AM

as outstanding as i have learned to expect from you both. bravo!!
-Dave

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-04 08:39 AM

YAY!!! BRAVO!!! Another breathtakingly beautiful duet, sweet friends, you two make such enchantment happen with your words, this is sooooooo lovely! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) We all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Lauren and Larry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-04 09:11 AM

Oh my gosh this is stunning, you two...absolutely beautiful...I love it....BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-02-04 09:18 AM

You two hit the jackpot!
Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-02-04 10:02 AM

amusemi~

thank you, tis my favorite pat as well....

~~
peppermint35~

thank you, larry is a delight to 'merge' with....

~~

JamesMichael~

Thanks James, glad you enjoyed...

~~

NapalmsConstantlyConfused~

Dave, your comments are always so kind....thanks

~~

Noah~

your replies are so vivid, and so heart warming...thank you sweet friend...

~~

Karen~

thank you, thank you, thank you.....Larry is great to write with.....he is an added smile to these pages....appreciate your words always...HUGS

~~

Interloper~

WOW thanks....appreciate your time in reading this....

~~~

Thanks Larry for another fun write....it has been a much needed smile...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-04-2002 10:06 AM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-02-04 10:05 AM

beautiful Larry and Lauren, flows like a river of love..

~Victoria~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-02-04 02:25 PM

Lauren,
I was thrilled that you handled the responses on these. Very well done and appreciated. Thanks

Victoria,
Thank you. As you know...these are fun to do!

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