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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Thoughts for this were taken from the Song of Solomon...So I give credit to "that".... these are my thoughts....on how I read the verses.... You have placed your house Upon a tower Built your windows pointing Sea bound, filled each With wisdom, desire Drunken lips of perfect Wine I, myself, would seek him Until the break of day, Until the mountains shed Their shadows Until the fields of lilies Wither and seek rain Until gardens no longer Seek the soils Harvesting fruits To lay among my tongue Ravish my heart Be a gentle pillar Of strength Place not a seal on thy heart Embrace my soul Let water quench Thy love Cause me to hear your Desire ~~~~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-03-2002 07:49 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren~This write is exquisite! You write with your heart and soul...your entire being is in very chosen word you so carefully pen. I appreciate and enjoy your work so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A very lovely reflection from a very lovely lady. I'm sure in all of King Solomon's wisdom should he be alive today, you would be a perfect candidate for Queen. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.  -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully done Lauren..always enjoy your words...hugss ~Vic |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, I'm very glad to see that you did post this lovely piece. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have heard the Song Of Solomon and this inspiring piece from your golden heart sings with true beauty, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh Lauren, you have written a glorious poem, this is just, oh my, gives me hope, lifts my spirits and makes me weep that someone can put those thoughts into words when I feel I cannot. I just love this one, hon, it's beautiful.  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...you did a magnificent job with this one...I love the way it felt...BRAVO!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so beautiful, Lauren...that I am at a loss for words....and I am hardly EVER at a loss for words...its just that this poem is so gorgeous and so very special that there are no words which can do it justice, so I will just have to send you King Solomon, himself!  ((hugs))copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Exquisite words, my vision of Solomon is more on the justice that pervaded his reign..he must have had that romantic side hidden well within the castle walls |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Passion at its purest and richest. Very well done. You have a heart of gold, friend. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren, beautiful my friend, just beautiful... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Greeneyes! *S* Just yesterday, I was talking with a friend who's trying to read the Bible and was bogged down in begats. *G* I told her to try the New Testament, Psalms, or Song of Solomon... if I send this poem, I can guess what her choice will be. *S* Lovely write! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Nancy, Silver Streak, ~Victoria~, Michael, Noah~ I am so thrilled you enjoyed this….I appreciate you taking your time to read, and respond so graciously…....  Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-04-2002 10:51 AM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Kay, Karen, Lyra, ecrivan, Larry, Donna, suthern, Your responses have added that smile to my face….thank you all kindly…..I am indeed grateful this went over well, as I was hesitant to post, due to the fact this was my first attempt at this style of poem….Thanks to you all….  all Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-04-2002 10:59 AM).] |
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