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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-02-03 05:15 PM

Each day turns Into night,
Each page turns
Into a memory,
A memory that lights
my eyes away,
Each page turns,
Each day goes
with every single rose
that brought me
Into tears
The rose that you gave to me
Even though,
When love fades away,
with It Is light shone
Into my eyes,
Each page turns
Into tears
Each page turns
Into tears,
Each page burns
With It Is candle,
burns and melts away
with sorrow and pain,
Each page turns
brings me Into a memory,
A memory that lived for a long time,
Each page turns,
Each page of every
word you wrote
Now It Is fading
With It Is own light,
Each page turns...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-02-03 07:51 PM

Vandana, even though we are apart by thousands of miles, I can feel the tears in this one.....

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-03 08:11 PM

Oh this is so sad Vandana. But, the words...it could be a song if put to music.
Enjoyed this tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-03 09:24 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Vandana, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I pray that soon you will turn the next page hand in hand with the one you love and you will forever find true happiness together in each day, for you deserve the greatest happiness, and we all love you so much fore who you are, a loving and compassionate person with wonderful dreams to share! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts are always with you and I am always here if you need someone to talk to! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2002-02-03 11:53 PM

Sounds like it’s time to get a new book Vandana. This sounds painful, I know, I’ve been there.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-02-03 11:55 PM

Oh gosh your pain is so strong in this poem...Turn the page and start a new chapter so that again a smile with grace your face and heart. My heart goes out to you, dear one. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-02-04 12:01 PM

You wrote the pain with excellence, nicely done. Enchantress is right, with music this could easily be a song, and one many could identify with.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-02-04 03:45 AM

You wrote it so well.. and I can assuredly identify with these feelings..

It's hard to see right away.. but sometimes you have to know when to turn the page..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2002-02-04 08:05 AM

Each page turns
Into tears
Each page turns
Into tears,
Each page burns
With It Is candle,
burns and melts away
with sorrow and pain,
Each page turns
brings me Into a memory,
======================================

only a poet would think along these terms and express their pain this way.
this is a perfect metaphor to use.
Well done Poetess Vandana

heartfelt write.
take care
jm

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2002-02-04 11:37 AM

wonderfully written...

regards,
sudhir

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

10 posted 2002-02-04 07:45 PM

I'm so sorry for your sadness..

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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