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Fluctuations |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Fluctuations Those moments that mesmerize Put me in a doldrums weak. Transcend, simply hypnotize Fuzzy pleasure to a peek Sometimes, tightness in my throat Others, skipping of my heart Stays a feeling of emote Recognition of an art Happens in a poems rhyme A statement, a picture line Seems to play a trick on time Pulls me in, in sense and sign. Often brings a tear to lid Or smile that leads to a wile Fiercely livens up my ID Opens up my memory file In dreams I search that flame and Those feelings of blameless blame |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Methinks I'm not the only one shining around here...gads, Sy, this really likes me, so I'm going to just have to add it to my treasured trove... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This sounds pretty familiar, Sy... Haven't I heard it recently?...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you sweet lady  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Yes less the and ifs and buts  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Those moments that mesmerize Put me in a doldrums weak. Transcend, simply hypnotize Fuzzy pleasure to a peek Sometimes, tightness in my throat Others, skipping of my heart Stays a feeling of emote Recognition of an art Happens in a poems rhyme A statement, a picture line Seems to play a trick on time Pulls me in, in sense and sign. ====================================================== Your fluxuations cause vibrations ... elation aligning with inspiration A mystical mix of temptation ... laced with infatuation's fascination Surrender is sweet salvation ... imagination dances with anticpation This collaboration of communication ... needs no expert explantion Poetic levitations lead to ... rhymed reverie's revelations ... An invitation born of admiration ... a poets way of expressing appreciation. *winkiewinkie* me |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour this is really lovely, I like this one muchly. YOU do know it's extremely good don't you? Well I hope so. Wonderful work absolutely wonderful As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'm sure you triped over the dictionary this morning, let me kiss the boo-boo. WW R S |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, And here is one for you too |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ROFL..... thank Ron for Rhyme Zone Dictionary....LOL cuz its waaay to early to rhyme on my own... I hadnt even had me tea  *L**ww* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Seymour... reading it gave much pleasure (though I'm not sure it's fuzzy. *G*) A rhyming dictionary??? Where, oh where??? suthern starts a search... *G* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy...nicely done....very crafty poem...liked this... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I lkie this, many emotions shown. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Maybe this will help Magnus, Thank you for the read and comment. Walker, and thank you for the read and reply |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So wonderful. A |
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