Three Sheets Blind by Al K. Holic

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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-02-03 08:53 AM

Pains endured through time
past, present, untold
aching for release
the silence made bold

Filling emptiness
drowning thoughts of mind
as pouring one's self
getting three sheets blind

To numb such problems
that one can't forget
balance of power
that will shall soon set

For the morning after
or days if to be
all becomes quite clear
easier to see

As the mind wanders
wondering of you
purest hearts swallow
spirits of a few

by Al K. Holic

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-03 09:27 AM

ctowen,
I read you poem but I wasn't sure of what to make of it...so I will just say I liked your form.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-02-03 10:11 AM

Sounds like a few extra black Russians running through your head, Craig. If you find the one that causes complete amnesia, let me know. Like the poem, hope you are doing ok.
Sandra

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-02-03 12:30 PM

Oh gosh...this one is so powerful....Craig...your talent always amazes me with how you can take a subject and weave so well...I wish I could write on so many areas of life as you do. **big hugs**

I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-03 12:33 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo wonderful, sweet friend, your words of wisdom always chime in our ears and teach us such morales and lessons othat are thought-provoking! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet fridnd, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-02-03 01:59 PM

Yay! Oh this is so very true, your words always inspire me so well! I love you, dear friend!

Joanna

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-02-03 07:57 PM

Craig~

Very Powerful....you have a way of doing that ya know...always a pleasure to read...

be well...HUGS....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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