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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2002-02-03 02:09 AM


Love is just simply this for me.
Everywhere the wind journeys
The sails of my heart will catch its breath
And lean into the direction of your love.
So let this southern wind grow fond
Of carrying my sighs to your ears.
Love is simpy this.
Everywhere you are
My heart is.
Moonlit hopes give us courage to endure.
Cliche or not
I love you in truth.
I love you with a madness.
I love you to a depth.

I am many.

© Copyright 2002 Siofra - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-02-03 06:25 AM


Enjoyed your words of love...James
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2 posted 2002-02-03 07:56 AM



I like this, Siofra....

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3 posted 2002-02-03 11:58 AM


Very nice Siofra, I like the flow of it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-02-03 12:05 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, declaring love is never a cliche for every lovers dream is a whole new beginning of happiness! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-03 12:19 PM


*sigh* so romantically beautiful...I love it...simple it isn't...filled with the kind of love that makes one sigh it sure is...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nan
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6 posted 2002-02-03 02:13 PM


Looks like E.B. Browning has had an effect upon you... Nicely done...

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7 posted 2002-02-03 02:39 PM


Yay, this is so sweet of you to write for your love, this is so sweet of you!

Joanna

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8 posted 2002-02-04 11:49 AM


As someone who appreciates the Moonlight, I loved this.

Thank you Siofra  

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2002-02-04 11:51 AM


I love you to a depth
....

that's wonderfully said...

regards,
sudhir

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10 posted 2002-02-04 11:51 AM


I'm hoping that this time, I can add you to my library.

Thank you again.

Janet Marie
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11 posted 2002-02-04 02:58 PM


Love is just simply this for me.
Everywhere the wind journeys
The sails of my heart will catch its breath
And lean into the direction of your love.
So let this southern wind grow fond
Of carrying my sighs to your ears.
======================================
I love you in truth.
I love you with a madness.
I love you to a depth.
======================================

and this is "simply" exquisite.
superp in its expression, and sincerety.
impressive level of inspire.
jm

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2002-02-04 03:02 PM


Down about 20 fathoms, at least
I love this piece.  well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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