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just remember |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
what it came down to was your idea of what I was and for me to be honest I did not like that person I am not always like this I can sometimes be angry things you say can hurt me I just never speak up so when you say that I changed just keep this in your mind you never bothered to see what was inside the other me A real man |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
James, You are so right.Too many times we see what is on the surface and don't take the time to see what's beneath.If we did I'm sure we'd all be surprised at what we'd find.Greatly done here. peaches |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - We can grow together, or we can grow apart... One thing's for sure - We WILL grow one way or the other... To grow together means making an effort to see where each other are headed... Well said, JB..  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Long live the other selves that should be kept from view, as long as we're not talking about multiple personalities and one is a killer  touching poem James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo powerfully expressed, sweet friend, it helps to be honest all the tim ebut in order to do so, we can't deny ourselves in order for those to understand deeply how we feel! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is well-said! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
When we can honestly accept the person for who they really are then it is a real and honest relationship..otherwise it is just playing a role we think they want to see. My heart goes out to you. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, Sir, I have to admit that you've made me really think a position over that I had taken to mind. I like this. You've shown me something here that I will carry with me from now on. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
so when you say that I changed just keep this in your mind you never bothered to see what was inside the other me I could have written that about my ex- husband..A big reason why the ex is now in front of the name. I’m relating to this one. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
send this beautiful bit o poetry to my 'rents, won't you? i feel you. perhaps in a different context, but it still hurts no matter who's trying to stuff you into another mold. *simplify* |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
yes..wisdom in this that I truly love. enjoyed immensely. I am many. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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