He wants to go but needs to stay

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Open Poetry #18

He wants to go but needs to stay

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-02 10:02 PM

He's so perfect in every way
why can't he see it so
married young and lived the life
then somehow forgot to grow

Now faced with uncertainty
not wanting to be there
he wants to go, but needs to stay
how does he just not care

Not about what is happening
for this troubles him to death
but for his own happiness
something he is willing to forget

A man so kind and gentle
with a heart upon his sleave
his touch is soft and tender
his voice a melody

Three little things hold him
to the loneliness of his heart
Children who'm adore him
who he couldn't bare to part

Now he has a Sugar Bear
to remind him he has rights
and if she see's him giving up
she will surely put up a fight

Sugar Bear reminds him
of the sweetest things in life
and that with a little tenderness
things can be alright

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2002-02-02 10:18 PM

At this point in time this one has a big impact on me, well done!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-02-02 10:56 PM

I hope that Sugar Bear doesn't get bitter if he does not take her heed

well expressed!

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