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A Writer's Paradise
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A Writer's Paradise |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Shimmering visions of tranquility Reflect on waters of Summer green A smorgasboard of beauty Varying shades of blue in between A seagull skims the mirrored water In search of a morsel or two As I sit here and absorb this paradise Soaking up this spectacular view I come here so very often As I find it such an inspirational place And I can be assured that when I leave I'll be leaving with a smile on my face Many times I come here alone Always with my pen in hand It is the conductor of my emotions And will orchestrate my heart on command I spy some pieces of driftwood Washed up from the night before The footprints of last nights lovers Have been erased by the tide once more A warm breeze softly brushes my face As I sit here on the sand and write Maybe I'll stay here until sunset To witness the coming of the night Such a perfect place for romance Beneath a spectacular starry sky Another beautiful day is now over Heralded by the seagull's lonely cry How very peaceful is this paradise Here I could dream my life away A totally stress free environment This scene ever changing each day Suetang |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Beautiful imagery!We all need a place like this.Nice job! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish I could just drift away into the dreams and visions of poetry forever! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you write, they always have me envisioning the most beautiful things! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful imagery Sue and a very calming, relaxing read. Enjoyed thoroughly. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem with great imagery. Sigh... I must make time real soon to spend some time at the beach... thanks for reminding me.  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Just beautiful Sue, I am sure this is a real place you visit, wonderful imagery. floria Floria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sue, you really have me yearning for the ocean blue and sandy beaches with this one! It really does sound like an inspirational place. In California, I had two such places, I used to call them my thinking and meditation spots. Funny, I almost never wrote poetry after visiting those spots, but would either paint or make mobiles. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, it does sound lovely, I think we all need a place like this to retreat to sometimes. What a great place to go and write…lucky you Sue. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I wish I lived near the ocean again..I so miss the soothing affects of walking the beach...BRAVO!!! I love it...and the picture too...Hi Sue...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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