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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2002-02-02 04:02 PM


Come here
my Valentine
the sweetest kisses
you'll give
the one that I will
not receive from him
Love me tender
if only for today
erase all the pain
that his love spread
Make me forget his
touch
and as this romantic night
comes to an end
lets' create brand new memories
of what good love is
tonight I'm yours
my gentle Valentine




© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
sodpossom
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1 posted 2002-02-02 04:03 PM


Very sweet!!
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2 posted 2002-02-02 05:13 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this Valentines Day fill your heart with true loves happiness and many sweet romanticm memories! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-03 11:18 AM


oohh what a heartfelt invitation!
I'm feelin this very much

Startime
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4 posted 2002-02-03 11:21 AM


*sigh* oh gosh...I love the feel of this wonderful poem....Beautiful...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-02-03 09:19 PM


Sweet, I hope he erases the other memories.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-02-03 09:22 PM


This sounds like a Valentine's Day dream come true.......
I really liked it!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
7 posted 2002-02-03 10:52 PM


Sometimes, we have to take love where we find it. Hope your Valentine is all you wish for

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2002-02-03 10:57 PM


if he doesn't love you...another will...for you are worth being loved...helen
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