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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
When a mountain blocks your way and when your blue sky turns grey I will take your hand When a dust storm leaves you blind and when sorrow is all you find By your side I will stand When all your joy has died and when you run out of places to hide I will be your oceans sand When lifes river floods your soul and when you're trapped in the darkest of holes Give me a chance,I think I can |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) God Bless You, sweet freind, your loving compassionate heart reaches out with aloving hand in this tender poem! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet freind, may you always hold love close to your heart and work through all your tears and smiles together forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stevie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is just gorgeous..i loved it sodpossum ~Victoria~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
this would be the perfect message to send to anyone you love...could be on the front of a greeting card...Nicely done.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is the first serious piece I've seen from you in a while, Stevie...and its really beautiful....  Just so you know...I like your funny ones also... Please give Crystal and Chase a big hug from me...and theres one there for you too! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sodpossum....So sweetly romantic! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
don't see why you can't be there under all those circumstances  It's great to see you write something as thoughtful as this. Keep it coming |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lovely! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Wonderfully put! Send this one to all your dear friends! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nice sentiments Michael Auguste~ |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,I think this is one of your best!  Love you  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Stevie, When my obstacles were tall And the dark days looked like fall, I needed a hand When I couldn’t find my way And sorrow was here to stay I needed you near When my heart was broken And my thoughts went unspoken I needed a place to stand When I was overwhelmed by life Surrounded by so much strife You were my chance, I knew you could Way cool! Super...super...super... [This message has been edited by Larry C (02-03-2002 01:18 AM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
There was a person like this for me who arrived in my darkest hour, otherwise I would not be here today...I feel a poem coming on!!! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
The comforting words we all long to hear. peaches |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice, very nice...I'd give you the chance in a heartbeat |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*bump* |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sodpossom, so nice to know someone will be there when needed, Hmmm I'll give you a call when I'm down..lovely poem. floria Floria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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