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The big highway
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The big highway |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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The big highway I don't know how; I don't know where I was in a car that was sideways, somehow On a big highway, there Blocked by a big truck keeping us in a safe way. But suddenly the big truck had gone away We were open to oncoming traffic our way When suddenly my mind was in a disorientated state I knew we'd been hit somehow, some way, it was my fate. As my spirit was trying to wander away I heard a voice say. Don't you know what happened? You're dead now you see?And I knew I was headed for eternity As my spirit was slowly drifting away. And my mind seemed to say Lord Jesus, here I am; I'm coming your way, today! And thank for your loving way; for your Salvation, I pray As I dreamed I was killed today On the big highway. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida March 16, 2001 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Some dream that was! It would have been a real nightmare if you didn't know where you were going, wouldn't it? Good poem! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I agree with Denise.Nice write! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, I couldn't help but tear up reading this because it must have been so frightening dreaming of something like this so real, I'm happy it was just a dream! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this was a scary but wonderfully written poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Yes, Denise. I agree with you.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
I agree, sodpossom. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Noah. We shouldn't fear death! It is graduation time. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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