Open Poetry #18 |
Cantando-Singing |
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Tenga cuidado, Peligro esta aqui. Amor pasado. You must have a care, You tread amid great danger. An old love calls you. Nan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I don't know why I am getting chills from this little beauty....It is just doing that to me....good chills...not bad oness...Mannnnn.... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Nan, this is a wonderful haiku! You must have a care, You tread amid great danger. An old love calls you. My answer: You make me wonder As I fly through God's blue sky Calling all to love. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-02-2002 10:28 AM).] |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Nan This was wonderful! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful haiku, Nan... My answer my new husband's love will keep me safe from all harm with old love's guidance copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
My love Guinevere My sweet RosePetal of joy Always in my dreams (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this haiku is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may true love forever shine in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Magnus, Thanks-'Chills' is a compliment indeed. Dear newell, 'calling all to love' -wonderful reply. Dear sp, Glad you liked it-and very glad you let me know. You know how I eat up compliments. Dear Lyra, That's a wonderful reply, and a lovely haiku on its very own. Your new husband is a lucky man. Does he get tired of hearing that from his friends? Dear Noah, Very nice haiku-I like it. Thank you for your reply. Nan |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Tenga cuidado el amor a veces es malo especialmente el amor pasado I love this poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In wake of stepping ripples gather far and wide no where can we hide I do so enjoy when poets inspire others...thank you for this gem...it's a Keeper... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Pilgrimage this is just beautiful. Italian? some of the words are familiar to me.. reminds me of my dad. lovely, floria Floria |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Walker, I am so glad you liked it. Verdadamente! Dear Sunshine, Before me- your smile, Behind me-a past regret. What is in the now? Dear Floria, It's Spanish. I've found that when people speak Italian I can make out about one word in four, because they are so similar. Of course, I only make out one word in two when they speak Spanish. (My classes were a lot better on verb tenses than on common vocabulary) Nan |
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