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Pilgrimage
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0 posted 2002-02-02 10:13 AM


Tenga cuidado,
Peligro esta aqui.
Amor pasado.

You must have a care,
You tread amid great danger.
An old love calls you.

Nan

© Copyright 2002 Nancy Wilcox - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-02-02 10:22 AM


I don't know why I am getting chills from
this little beauty....It is just doing that
to me....good chills...not bad oness...Mannnnn....

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-02-02 10:28 AM


Nan, this is a wonderful haiku!  

You must have a care,
You tread amid great danger.
An old love calls you.

My answer:

You make me wonder
As I fly through God's blue sky
Calling all to love.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-02-2002 10:28 AM).]

sodpossom
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3 posted 2002-02-02 12:31 PM


Nan
This was wonderful!

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-02-02 12:47 PM


A beautiful haiku, Nan...

My answer

my new husband's love
will keep me safe from all harm
with old love's guidance

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-02-02 02:49 PM


My love Guinevere
My sweet RosePetal of joy
Always in my dreams



(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this haiku is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may true love forever shine in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2002-02-02 03:12 PM


Dear Magnus,
Thanks-'Chills' is a compliment indeed.

Dear newell,
'calling all to love' -wonderful reply.

Dear sp,
Glad you liked it-and very glad you let me know. You know how I eat up compliments.

Dear Lyra,
That's a wonderful reply, and a lovely haiku on its very own. Your new husband is a lucky man. Does he get tired of hearing that from his friends?

Dear Noah,
Very nice haiku-I like it. Thank you for your reply.

Nan

walker
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7 posted 2002-02-02 03:46 PM


Tenga cuidado
el amor a veces
es malo especialmente
el amor pasado
I love this poem.

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8 posted 2002-02-02 06:38 PM



In wake of stepping
ripples gather far and wide
no where can we hide


I do so enjoy when poets inspire others...thank you for this gem...it's a Keeper...

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9 posted 2002-02-02 07:04 PM


Pilgrimage this is just beautiful. Italian? some of the words are familiar to me.. reminds me of my dad. lovely, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2002-02-02 09:44 PM


Dear Walker,
I am so glad you liked it. Verdadamente!

Dear Sunshine,

Before me- your smile,
Behind me-a past regret.
What is in the now?

Dear Floria,
It's Spanish. I've found that when people speak Italian I can make out about one word in four, because they are so similar. Of course, I only make out one word in two when they speak Spanish. (My classes were a lot better on verb tenses than on common vocabulary)

Nan

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