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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-02-02 09:35 AM

                                Morning Love

                      Kiss me softly darling Jasmine
                      oh my heart begins to stir
                      when your searching lips deliver
                      sweet delight that makes me quiver
                      from the warmth of your lips pursed.
                      Kiss me deeply darling Jasmine
                      when the light returns to earth.

                      Chorus:
                      There's is moonlight in the evening
                      there are stars that glow above
                      but there is nothing like the feeling
                      I get with you in morning love.

                      Take my hand and all my wishes
                      upon your breast when morning comes.
                      Take me where my dreams won't perish
                      across the hills of love I cherish
                      and count my heart-beats one by one.
                      Drink my passion darling Jasmine
                      while our romance greets the sun.

                      Rep Chorus:

                      Tag:
                      Just you and I darling Jasmine
                      You and I when the morning comes
                      There can be no greater pleasure
                      Than you and I and morning love.
                      you and I and morning love...........fade
                      [B][/B]

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-02-02 09:42 AM

Yes!

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2002-02-02 09:50 AM

I think you've got a winner here buddy

Snowed in, does a writer good

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-02 09:51 AM

...This is so nice to wake up to!...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-02-02 10:00 AM

a beautiful song it is too ethome..wonderfully done

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-02-02 10:11 AM

liked it

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-02-02 11:05 AM

                      Kiss me softly darling Jasmine
                      oh my heart begins to stir
                      when your searching lips deliver
                      sweet delight that makes me quiver
                      from the warmth of your lips pursed.
                      Kiss me deeply darling Jasmine
                      when the light returns to earth.

                      Chorus:
                      There's is moonlight in the evening
                      there are stars that glow above
                      but there is nothing like the feeling
                      I get with you in morning love.

                      Take my hand and all my wishes
                      upon your breast when morning comes.
                      Take me where my dreams won't perish
                      across the hills of love I cherish
                      and count my heart-beats one by one.
                      Drink my passion darling Jasmine
                      while our romance greets the sun.

==============================

Well this is just a big ole *sigh* waiting to happen

Eric this is such a lovely melody of heart.
I recall "Jasmine" inspiring great things in you before.
This is another keeper for my E-babes collection

We wish ourselves beautiful ...
and cry in the night.
It's not the love you feared ...
but the fall from the height.

~Edwin McCain~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-02-02 11:13 AM

Ethome--Nothing more wonderful then morning love...unless it's evening love. Your poem is so sweet and dreamy, must come from the place where love songs are born.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2002-02-02 11:30 AM

I LOVE IT!!!I LOVE IT!!!!

what better way than this to start the day...This song is magnificent...I really, really love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

9 posted 2002-02-02 12:27 PM

Very nice!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-02-02 02:16 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhhh...you are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving heart always shines with the beauty of true romance! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, you are a true delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

11 posted 2002-02-02 02:24 PM

Perfectly romantic

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2002-02-02 05:01 PM

Thanks to all for the wonderful replies and the encouragement. I shall be around to view and enjoy your work!
Eric

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-02-03 06:51 AM

This is fabulous ethome...James

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2002-02-03 08:07 AM

Oh my goodness, what to say
THis is so well written
Flowed like sweet honey, smooth and yet slow enough to grasp every passionate word
Simply exquisite
Liz

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

15 posted 2002-02-03 11:20 AM

Thank you so much James and Elizabeth for the very encouraging words and the input. I appreciate it so very much!!

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

16 posted 2002-02-04 10:51 AM

This is beautifully expressed, my friend...

regards,
sudhir

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

17 posted 2002-02-04 02:05 PM

"There's is moonlight in the evening
there are stars that glow above
but there is nothing like the feeling
I get with you in morning love."

yep. major sighs here

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

18 posted 2002-02-04 02:10 PM

When does this gem get published?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

19 posted 2002-02-05 12:50 PM

Thanks Sudhir for taking the time to read this piece, much appreciated!

Sea, it's always good to hera from you and thanks for the kind words!

Interloper, I don't know when that's going to happen but I'd like to! Thanks!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

20 posted 2002-02-05 04:22 AM

I DO wish you would lay a couple of tracks down to share with us! (pouting)

magnifique, mon amis! leaves me sighing, it's good to have you home again!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

21 posted 2002-02-05 06:05 AM

Thank ya Serenity....you're definitely a sweet southern belle! I'll let ya know when I get it down on an mp3

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