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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-02-02 08:43 AM



It's okay to play
with my heart
I've granted you permission
I give myself selfishly
just like that
I only have one demand
that you love me
and embrace me
warmly during the day
and passionately at night

[This message has been edited by walker (02-02-2002 02:23 PM).]

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-02-02 09:19 AM


Hey you gat a deal that can't be refused!   Well put Walker....he good luck with it!
Magnus
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2 posted 2002-02-02 01:25 PM


I think this is what we all want...
Just a basic part of us that we need to feel.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-02-02 01:29 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe it is never selfish to play with ones heart when two both love each other! (kiss on cheek) May love forever bring you true happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a fabulous poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-02-02 01:38 PM


I think sometimes we have to make demands to make sure we are understood...James
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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5 posted 2002-02-02 02:35 PM


You know I love this one, walker.
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
6 posted 2002-02-02 03:29 PM


Dear Walker,
Me too! Loved the way you wrote it.

Nan

sodpossom
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N.C
7 posted 2002-02-02 03:43 PM


Beautiful and well said!
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