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My Heart
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My Heart |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Sometimes it seems as if there's nowhere I can go. From the pain inside me that seems to overflow. Darkness that surrounds my heart. Chipping away at each little part. The pain that surrounds it seems so real. The sadness is too much that I feel. My heart trying to break through this wall of despair. Trying so hard to make the repairs. Feels like I've been locked up and thrown away the key. How do I get this turmoil out of me? Like a theif in the night. Shaking completly with so much fright. My tears falling endlessly. Crying and crying inside of me. Take the knife and cut my heart in two. That would be so much easier to do. My pillow is now soaked with tears. Of pains come and gone over the years. I know somehow I'll finally break free. And then my heart can deeply breathe. Chipping away the darkness and the fright. Taking back it's beating life. Filling it with the birghtness of light. Giving it back it's eternal life. Peaches  P.S. Any help or criticism would be appreciated.Sorry a sad one, but am in a slump these days. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches...slumps are OK...we all have those.. Writing about your feelings is GREAT... Hope your days are brighter...you need to allow yourself to breath...Just try to think about the good things...I know it is hard.. I have my moments too...But they are just moments...not eternities... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Peaches! Sorry...it ain't no fun with challenges like these. Life may be a pain, Something yet to gain. I'd like to find out, What is it all about? When you have the answers let me know. In the mean time, I can't think of a better place to hang out. Many people here who care. Hang in there and keep expressing yourself like this, thanks.  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Magnus:Thank you so much.Thank goodness for the moments because soon they will pass.You always know just what to say.Thanks my dear friend. LarryC:Thanks you for your support.Every little bit helps. Peaches |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Peaches, this is soooooooo heartaching, my heart goes out to you and I hope you are OK now! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I am always here for you if you need someone to talk you, my e-mail is noahandco@hotmail.com! My heart is with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hang on, sweetie. I just wrote a sad poem too. Sometimes things just get to you. Keep expressing it, I know it helps me, anyway. Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Peaches don't fret; dont' sink in that funnel Your on a train ride in one big tunnel Look, ahead, peaches See that big bright light A whole bunch of sunshine ahead is in sight. And look up at night, bright stars still aglow As everything God made is singing His show Listen! And hear, song birds singing to you Spring flowers will bloom soon, and we all love you. Don't you know that our hearts need your heart, too. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah:Thanks so much for your support.It's friends like you who help me through. Sandra:You're right my writing helps me in so many ways.How about we hang on together.Two is stronger than one. Newell:Thank you very much.As I read your words I found myself smiling.I appreciate the support. Peaches |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
sad  but enjoyed  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Vandana:Thank you. Peaches |
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