Open Poetry #18 |
Phoenix |
lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
Shunned and counted last, I stand alone again. Rigid with their curses cast, I cannot bear the pain. But, I will not give in, my inner strength will never fade. I won't allow them to win, of their malevolence i'll never be afraid. I know they can't stop me, nor will they drag me down. Despite the depth of this murky sea, I refuse to sink and drown. I will ultimately rise, a flaming phoenix in the night. Gaze deeply into my shining eyes, see the fire burning bright. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love it, I love it, yes, always believe in yourself and you will go far, for His love will never fail and even when we can be the albatross, we will always rise as the phoenix and warble like a sparrow with symphonies of love and promising joy! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, we're all soooooo proud of you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joe, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, good! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rise phoenix rise and soar high. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I will ultimately rise, a flaming phoenix in the night." Yes, and from a position of great inner strength and resolve. Well done. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
From the ashes of Hell...into the light of day...you shall rise...and conquer... Nicely written..enjoyed.. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Thats right!Rise above.Very positive write! |
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