Open Poetry #18 |
Darkness To Dawn |
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Darkness To Dawn Between the darkness and the dawn, There lies a different zone. No sun shines in this darkness, It holds it's own tone. Here birds sleep, fatigued from flight, And street lights must be on. Then people greet with a good night, While all are looking wan. There are no children crying, For they are tucked in bed. And lovers now are sighing, As goodnight they dread. Before you even realize, As this dark zone you leave. The sun is rising in the skies, You've just passed the eve. Of a bright new tomorrow. Floria [This message has been edited by strbbux (02-01-2002 02:23 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Floria, I've been in the Twilight Zone myself No, truly this is inspirational and tells me others feel as I do, that there is this special place where there is a rest, a healing, almost magical. I love this poem. Thank you for sharing. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
welcome the morrow your words speak to us all poets listening |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this indeed feels like the Twilight Zone, I can relate to this so much! (sigh) WE may find ourselves tripping into darkness every now and then, but there is always the start of a brand new day to follow filled with sunshine and love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dear Irish Rose, I am glad that you were able to see the double meaning to this. In the end, everything turns out fine with a bright new tomorrow. floria Interloper, thank you so much for your kind words. floria Noah, exactly,,you did get the point. Thank you kindly for always responding to my poems, it means a lot to me. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
yes, it does turn out to be a new tomorrow... IF only we all could just remember that thought every day of our lives...Nicely done Floria.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Floria~ Heres to better days, and brighter tomorrows.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the time when the night turns to a new day both in the physical and the spiritual. You did very well with this layered write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the imagery in this poem, Floria... I hope that all of our tomorrows are bright! This is a wonderful healing poem. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, thank you so much for your kind reply. Yes I would wish we could remember that always. floria Vandana, thank you for your reply. floria Lauren, thank you, I wish you the same, floria Kethry, thank you, that was my favorite part too. I was going a different way with it when I started writing it, and then I saw the light. floria Thank You Lyra, very much,, I do think it is healing, started out dark and then I saw the light. Glad I did, floria Floria |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Floria The imagery you portrayed in this piece was exquisite and so beautifully romantic. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Floria, Looking forward to a new day is what helps me through the bad ones.You have made the point well here and I love the imagery you use. Peaches |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
You briefly pass through my realm, Where shadows take hold the helm, A time where most pass in dreams But is really different than it seems. Enjoyed Gloom |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
your words speak to me in volumes!! I sure hope you show you husband all these wondeful poems you have been writing! He'd be a fool not to love them as much as we do!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sue, thank you so much for your kind words. floria Peaches, yes so right,, always look out of the dark, and into the Light. floria Prof. Gloom...very nice reply poem for me. thank you so much. floria Rose petal..thanks dear. Like I said before, my husband does not read my poetry..He is one that is in the dark..He doesn't appreciate any of it. thank you much Joanna, floria Floria |
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