Touch Me (inspired by Lady In White's "When People Touch")

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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-01 12:25 PM

Touch Me

Touch me with your thoughts
I will feel you near
Touch me with your words
I will read them well

Touch me with your voice
I’ll swoon from desire
Touch me with your song
I’ll sigh as I cry

Touch me with your lips
I’ll return your kiss
Touch me with your heart
I’ll hold it gently

Touch me with your hands
I’ll shake from your strength
Touch me with you flesh
I’ll melt in your arms

Touch me with your love
I will cherish it
Touch me with your soul
I will fly with you

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-01 12:27 PM

wow this is good writing!!! It's good to see everyone inspiring eachother around here

beautiful thoughts Karen!!
(hugs)

RP

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-02-01 12:38 PM

Karen,
Consider yourself touched! Sweet write.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-02-01 01:07 PM

soft and delicate write on a cold, dreary day here, gave me some comfort, thanks, Karen

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-01 01:14 PM

please come fly with me
for our souls are gemini
it shall ever be
eternity beckons us
and we turn our hearts thereto

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-02-01 01:21 PM

RosePetal...I think everyone here keeps inspiring me...I read the poems, including yours and the words just have to be said...Thank you, dear one. **big hugs**

LarryC....thank you, dear man....everyone needs to be touched...**big hugs**

Irish Rose...dear one, I am so glad you came to read and even happier to see you wonderful words...you are such a priceless treasure...**big hugs**

Interloper...now how did you know I am gemini...*giggling* well...I am cusp...so that make me gemini and cancer...what a combination that is...*giggling* to fly in fantasy with one like you would be a pleasure filled night of dreams indeed. Thank you...I was going to write a little verse but .... am in a hurry and one wouldn't come to mind...**big hugs**

I'm off to work for a few hours..catch you all later...I love you all dearly. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-01-2002 01:22 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-02-01 03:07 PM

yes...once again...you have gone and done it.
Written another beautifully romantic piece of
your heart onto the blue walls of PiP...
Beautifully written Karen...and very TOUCHING

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-02-01 04:42 PM

Karen, this is very, very beautiful. And when I read your words,

Touch me with your soul
I will fly with you
                             to the stars!!!

                     I'm on my way
My soul just soars.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-02-01 04:46 PM

Very beautiful. Now if I could just get someone special to hear it!
Sandra

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2002-02-01 04:56 PM

Karen,
are you a little touched?... *Innocent eyes*
Seriously good stuff.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-02-01 09:43 PM

Lady will be very pleased to see this, my friend...

It's good to see the inspiration being shared...

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-02-01 10:25 PM

This is wonderful Karen, there are more ways to touch than with the hands. Touch my soul. Touch my heart. just beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-02-01 11:26 PM

Karen - most moving this is. Touch me with your thoughts, just touch me...

BC

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