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leafseranade
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0 posted 2002-01-31 11:19 PM


who do you think gave birth
to that bunndle of cries
where did she get those gray pools
where did she get those eyes
she got everything from
her mother dear
who shared her laughter
and wiped up her tears
who fed her water
and bathed her bread
her mother dear
her father's dead

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-01-31 11:35 PM


leafseranade - You tell a sad tale. Take care of the little one....

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (01-31-2002 11:37 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-01-31 11:39 PM


OH my, sad
I don't think I've ever read you before, I will keep my eyes peeled for more of your work!

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3 posted 2002-01-31 11:43 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo very sad, my heart goes out to you and her fathers loss and I pray that now you can care for her and help her heal her tears and she will grow up strong with your love and his in heart! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts and prayers are always with you both! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-01 12:54 PM


Very, very sad that the father isn't there physically to share the joys as well as the sorrows. But he really is there, you know, for he is a flesh and blood part of the child.
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