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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-01-31 09:22 PM





Snow Senryus





Enchantment falling
Wonders anticipated
Diamonds careen

Delicate lighting
Magnificence magnified
Winter’s wonderment

Shimmering sequins
Maniacal mannequins
Snowbound silhouettes

Calendar cavorts
Hibernation’s happenstance
Never plan winter…



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-31 09:28 PM


"Never plan winter"...boy, you've got that right!
This is wonderful, and yes, this is just about how it looks outside!
Thank you for these tonight.
~Warm hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-01-31 09:39 PM


You certainly have captured the day, Karilea...and the evening too!
Very beautifully written!

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-01-31 09:39 PM


I miss the snow so much that I think I'm going to go help Enchantress shovel the snow where she lives LOL
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4 posted 2002-01-31 09:52 PM


thats how last weeks snow looked here on my pine tree..darn I wish that cold weather would return ..70's in January is just not natural!!!

very nice

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5 posted 2002-01-31 10:17 PM


Ok.....I'm moving back home to Michigan!
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6 posted 2002-01-31 10:45 PM


This sends a chill to my heart. Beautiful.

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7 posted 2002-02-01 03:10 AM


You have been peeking at my little snow angel and me haven't you   We saw just what you saw, and are having fun playing in its wonder.  Beautiful Karilea.

~* Carpe' Diem  *~

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8 posted 2002-02-01 04:45 AM


Beautiful picture and exceptional writing!
I enjoyed both so much but we have some ploughed up snow banks here that are higher than a two story house. Too much of a good thing in our eyes.
Good stuff Karilea!

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2002-02-01 06:13 AM


beautiful each one of them.....

Regards,
sudhir

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10 posted 2002-02-01 12:51 PM


cannot plan winter
your wonderful Senryus
ah, not withstanding

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11 posted 2002-02-01 12:53 PM


*sigh* ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! You brought to life magical visions of snow that left me in awe...I love these. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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12 posted 2002-02-01 12:55 PM


Sunshine,
Cold weather's caress! Thanks...delightful write.

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13 posted 2002-02-01 01:52 PM


I'm having a real hard time with these senryus, in that there's kitties to be kicked, and I have a boot!  lol
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14 posted 2002-02-01 01:56 PM




(smiles) Ooooooohhhhh...these are sooooooo pretty, sweet friend, I would love to shovel your sidewalk and driveway if I could always, for you are sunshine to us all! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, these are gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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15 posted 2002-02-01 02:13 PM


Very nice Sunshine, Hey you took a picture of my back yard. LOL...great snow poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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