Open Poetry #18 |
Snow Senryus |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Snow Senryus Enchantment falling Wonders anticipated Diamonds careen Delicate lighting Magnificence magnified Winter’s wonderment Shimmering sequins Maniacal mannequins Snowbound silhouettes Calendar cavorts Hibernation’s happenstance Never plan winter… |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Never plan winter"...boy, you've got that right! This is wonderful, and yes, this is just about how it looks outside! Thank you for these tonight. ~Warm hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You certainly have captured the day, Karilea...and the evening too! Very beautifully written! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I miss the snow so much that I think I'm going to go help Enchantress shovel the snow where she lives LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thats how last weeks snow looked here on my pine tree..darn I wish that cold weather would return ..70's in January is just not natural!!! very nice M |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok.....I'm moving back home to Michigan! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
This sends a chill to my heart. Beautiful. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You have been peeking at my little snow angel and me haven't you We saw just what you saw, and are having fun playing in its wonder. Beautiful Karilea. ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful picture and exceptional writing! I enjoyed both so much but we have some ploughed up snow banks here that are higher than a two story house. Too much of a good thing in our eyes. Good stuff Karilea! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautiful each one of them..... Regards, sudhir |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
cannot plan winter your wonderful Senryus ah, not withstanding |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! You brought to life magical visions of snow that left me in awe...I love these. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sunshine, Cold weather's caress! Thanks...delightful write. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I'm having a real hard time with these senryus, in that there's kitties to be kicked, and I have a boot! lol |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooooooohhhhh...these are sooooooo pretty, sweet friend, I would love to shovel your sidewalk and driveway if I could always, for you are sunshine to us all! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, these are gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Sunshine, Hey you took a picture of my back yard. LOL...great snow poem. floria Floria |
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