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Crying In A Dream
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Crying In A Dream |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Crying In A Dream The little boy craves for love He cries painfully in his dream A dream he meets a butterfly and a white dove Hovering above the sails of his boat His heart torn to shreads He cries as he prays to be heard The butterfly and dove his only companions As he struggles in the meadow of his life His tears are torrents as he grows With melodies and struggles in his nightmares He grasps a white flower in his trembling hand As he lay down besides the butterfly and the dove Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I saw your name and had to reply. This poem could have been written by me  It's good to see you, Daniel, good to read the words you have. Thanks for being a good friend.Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kathleen, Thank you so much. Your words are meaningful to me. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Daniel, I have missed your words so much! It's also a pleasure to read your thoughts!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I have missed reading your work Daniel! This is very beautiful....wonderfully penned. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Daniel, this one touches my heart and soul, as the boy cries out to be heard, to be understood. I am keeping this one, as it is so tender, and speaks of great love and compassion. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oops, I forgot to save this soulful one. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ this is so sad.....makes me wish for smiles and warm hugs for the little boy |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Daniel - this was beautifully written by you - thanks for the read ~Roniece~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Daniel, this is such a sad tale, all too often true, I think. Sandra |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
A very touching write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Daniel, I couldn't help but cry reading this, for I believe I too could have easily written these words, for I too have been a boy that was abused physically and emotionally before, and had no friends and would kill to ever be recognized and liked! (big hugggsssss) God Bless that sweet little boy, sweet freind, I pray that his loved ones will reach out to him and have his spirit soar like the butterfly and the dove! We all love you so much, sweet friend, my heart is with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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