Open Poetry #18 |
Blessing Song |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
"Blessings, she croons. "Blessings to the brightness .........of the Sun." Bracelets bangling, riding up and down her slender wrists. White buckskin adorned with feathers, colorful beads.And, she lifts her hands to worship the warmth, the blazing light of the Sun.She is the dance of a thousand lights, the grace of decades of Moon rays. The wind gently touching the fringes of her skirt. Each touch embracing her, warming her soul with life.Shimmering. Radiant. She slowly moves into the Sun...they are one. A million tiny dots of light glistening like diamonds on the breath of twilight. Blessings flow down, rain down upon her as she chants a Blessing Song ..........to the heart of the Sun. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this sounds like a Native American!! DAGNABBIT I'M GOOD!! Very beautiful portrayal of a very beautiful thing |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah my friend, a piece that touches me for sure...I have a special place inside for the People and always look forward to writing such as this...especially from you... jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, I love it, this is such a gorgeous Native American blessing and muse! (kiss on cheek) May we all become accustomed in sporit and be one with the Sun and dance to the blessings and life it brings us all! (smiles) We all love you so uch, sweet Ivy, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the title is beautiful as is the poem and the thoughts behind is. Your words are magical. My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, magic is right...and very well done. I felt as though I was standing there.. |
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