Open Poetry #18 |
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Boys (In response to Arthur's girls!!!!!!) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA ![]() |
Boys I feel sorry for boys They make lots of noise And think they're really smart. But the girls I know Just glow and glow With big bright shining hearts. And when they're grown Boys play alone Drink beer and like to fart. Until one day A girl comes his way To show him God's finest art. Then lightning strikes As interest spikes He falls with exploding heart. And in the end 'Tis the girl that wins The game of love and smarts. As she rules the heat of the boys. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
interesting take... tho' I wouldn't agree with the content... thanks for sharing... regards, sudhir |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sudhir for dropping by. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
She rules the heat, she rules the heart, Heck Newell lets face it. SHE RULES. lol. nice write, floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
I believe that you are right, floria. And some wonder why we boys sometimes get upset and try to bully our way around. Why we ain't got a ghost of a chance. So I'll just say, yes dear, no dear, whatever you say, dear. Cause I know that as sweet as girls are I will be given my way, as a gift. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Newell....Floria has it right! GIRLS RULE!! ![]() Cute write, ~Hugs and smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Yes, Nancy, dear. ![]() Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* Oh yes, indeed, we do and you are just the right man to tell us so. I love it!!! **big hugs** ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you for your big hugs, Startime. I love you! xo ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I love it!!!! So grand, so grand! Donate to Rhonda's Crossing the Atlantic Fund!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, mmmmmmm...yep yep yep, women are always here to make men feel good and to bring a spark to a man's heart and vice versa! (big hugggssssss) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
interesting tongue in cheek here? ![]() |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
They definitely rule.Very enjoyable read! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Skyfire! Glad you like it! ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi ecrivan, glad you found it interesting. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sodpossom, glad you enjoyed. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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