Open Poetry #18 |
Petulant Poetess |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Petulant Poetess ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ ~*~~*~ ~*~*~*~ Petulant O'poetess poetic pout thoughts in naught out welling ink of think think think Spilling quill Soon will flow O'petulant poetess I know ..~*~.. I know *smiles* for a friend~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and I will add my smile to that of yours *s M |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've always got me thinking Marge (and smiling here as well). This piece brings to mind another of yours that I enjoyed so much as well .... your "Playful Ink of Think" (that title phrase pops into my mind so often), lol ... I love your "muse of think". Best wishes, /Kit |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cute..! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your friend is lucky to have you as a friend! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Awwww ! She will appreciate that, as I do~ Kit~ What a neat friend you are~ To remember something I've written is a real compliment to this poetess~ Thank you~ DG~ Tee-Hee ! 'She' loved it too ! Martie~ Well ... she's such a 'tweetie' ... I count myself as the lucky one~ AND ... speaking of 'Lucky' ... do you have a valid e-mail address for the scalawag ? E-mail me ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
looks like something slim pickens would ride down to Earth on but thats just the visual of the word layout, this poem aint no bomb |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Marge, This is cute, but it had to have been written about some other poetess...of all the words that come to mind for you petulant would NEVER fit. *S* Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Love it! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ You cracked me up !! Slim pickin's on ink is just what it's all about ! I adore your reply ! Dan~ Tee-Hee ! You've just never seen this poetess in pout~ Thank you for coming in~ SilverStreak~ I soooooo appreciate knowing you do~ Is this the greatest place, or what ???? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wow! great write marge! really cool flow of words, thoughts, sounds & meaning... i gotta question, though... Did you intend the poem to be shaped like a fish? hehe (Does that mean something stinks or is fishy?)... or... did you intend the poem to be shaped like missile ready to explode? hmmm.... or maybe is it shaped like a really chubby pen? LOL... wow!! i like this! it's always really cool to read a piece that makes me think on different levels, which this one does, but to add to it a mysterious SHAPE.... now!! THIS, i like!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is great Marge, think, think, think, that's all poets do besides write, write, write....hmmmm I loved the fish. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Adorable, Marge....just awesome! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write Marge! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Oh yes...I love it...I love it.. You do these shapes with such style. Magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: You use words so cleverly! What an accomplished poet you are! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Tee-Hee .... NOT A FISH~ or ... ???? NOT A MISSILE~ or ... ???? NOT A CHUBBY PEN~ but ... you're getting warm~ I'm laughing plumb out loud ... I rather thought it resembled a quill in an inkwell ... but, then what do I know ??? I'm a poetess ... not an artist ! ! Ahhhhhh ... back to the drawing board ~ Floria~ Thank you TOO ! Lyra~ I appreciate your read and reply~ Enchantress~ Thank you, my friend~ StarTime~ LOL ... Aha ... BUT what 'shape' is it ? Tee-Hee~ BettyLou~ Awwwwwww ! I'm gonna frame your reply~ Thank you from the heart of my little bottom~ HEY VICKY~ You smiling yet ??????????? Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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