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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-01-30 11:26 PM

Music drifts across the room
leaves me pensive as I dwell.
An old familiar song
rings deep inside a well.

With a promise I dare not cry
drowning wishes in my mind.
Pools swell inside my eyes,
trails of dreams I've left behind.

Voices echo in low bellows
as they carry down the hall
seep, oh constant sifting
through the cracks within the walls.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-30 11:29 PM

"With a promise I dare not cry
drowning wishes in my mind.
Pools swell inside my eyes,
trails of dreams I've left behind."

this touches deep.....
yet another fantastic write from you

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-01-31 12:13 PM

Blues, you sing the blues so well. I love the flow of the water imagery in this one.
Your poetry just keeps getting better and better.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-01-31 01:53 AM

BluesSerenade - you serenade this write well. Great poem, great title...

BC

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-01-31 01:57 AM

BluesSerenade~
Another lovely read~

'An old familiar song
rings deep inside a well.'

This resonates a memory~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-01-31 05:49 AM

Blues, it does sound pretty bad
when some people sing
in the shower doesn't it

enjoyed this

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2002-01-31 11:08 PM

BluesSerenade,
I really like this write. We can probably all relate. Nice job, thanks.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-01-31 11:22 PM

wow, your poems always blow me away! This is very expressive sweetie

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-01-31 11:23 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such nostalgia and yyearning fills these gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo wonderfully said! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

cruz
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since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

9 posted 2002-01-31 11:55 PM

Fantasmic! There's a lot down in that well. I think you've penned it rather nicely. I enjoy it!

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2002-02-01 02:44 AM

I understand every word of this!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-02-01 03:20 AM

Thank you everyone for reading.
I wrote this many moons ago and I'm still
there, sifting through my deep dark dreams.

Chrissy
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 81
Idaho, no I am not a farmer!

12 posted 2002-02-01 03:44 AM

Very very nice, and true. Yes, I cant realate.

Chrissy

Dance like noone is watching
Sing like noone is listening
Love like you'll never be hurt
Live like its Heaven on earth

HUGS AND KISSES TO ALL!!!

cottage
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

13 posted 2002-02-01 04:11 AM

this is really a beautiful and sentimental piece of write !

~ cottage

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