Flow Into The Night An attempt at brevity,

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Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

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Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-01-30 08:51 PM

~Flow Into The Night~

Flow into the night with me
Feel yourself drifting slowly
Touch the stars caress the sky
Float to delight just you and I

Flow through the misty light
Follow me into night’s starlight
Dare to dream of sweet desire
Feel your soul flying higher

Flow over the dreamer’s sigh
Never question where or why?
Touch my hand and off we go
Drifting sleepily in the flow

Flow into the night with me
Down rivers of stars sleepily
Touch the night with desire
Feel within its simmering fire

Flow into the dreamer’s mist
Into where you were kissed
Desires fade with the dawn
Nought but ashes in the morn

Marsha

This is an attempt at brevity from me, if you all hate it then I shall abandon it immediately. I have absolutely no opinion on it at all. So please feel free to slam it if you want to

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-30 08:55 PM

WOW!!! Oooohhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, I love it, this is absolutely fabulous, sweet friend, your words always make me smile no matter how you write them! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, may all your dreams forever come true and through the mist may you forever sigh with love to his love for you! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo breathtaking, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-01-30 08:57 PM

MarshaLove~
This is STUNNING~
And in your brevity you have caressed such beautiful rhyme~

Love it gal ... it's divine !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-30 09:09 PM

Marsha! I love it! I love it because most of mine are shorter than this and you call this brevity. I wish I could pull it all together and write one good longer one! LOL...Great stuff here Mushy Girl!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-01-30 09:31 PM

Mushy, This is a lovely poem! I think you should be proud of it darling girl!
we really like it. You have such talent.

(hugs)
RP

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

5 posted 2002-01-30 11:01 PM

Mushy, this is absolutely marvellous, wonderful and beautiful. I think you should relax, and apprectiate the fine talent that you have. I wouldn't worry about brevity. Just let it flow... The poem will tell you how long it wants to be.

I love your work, Mushy. Keep writing and posting those beautiful jewels. Again, you are wonderfull ... and so very sweet, too.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (01-30-2002 11:02 PM).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-01-31 02:08 AM

Marsha - this is lovely, I won't slamma jamma it at all. I love the way you write in all styles. A change was good to expand the concious, the mind, the self.

Nite Mushy,

BC

RavenSnow
Junior Member

since 2002-01-30

Posts 16

7 posted 2002-01-31 06:57 AM

Very nice Marsha! I liked the warm tones here as well as the approach you took.

RS

"A conspiracy of silence speaks louder than words."
Dr. Winston O'Boogie

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2002-01-31 07:19 AM

Oh Marsha!
less is definitely more from your pen.

Superb!
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

9 posted 2002-01-31 08:53 AM

Marsha,my dear friend you couldn`t write a bad poem if you tried.This was excellent which is not at all surprising.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

10 posted 2002-01-31 08:57 AM

Marsha
Its all good!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-01-31 12:00 PM

I knew you could do it

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-01-31 01:53 PM

Marsha...this is spectacular! Why would you want to abandon it?
Some flowers for you

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (01-31-2002 01:54 PM).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

13 posted 2002-01-31 02:55 PM

*grin* such a silly Mushy to think we would slam a poem that is so dreamy and done with in such a wonderful way...I love it!!! You have capture magical dreams and put them into beautiful words...More please. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

14 posted 2002-02-02 08:24 PM

Noah darling boy YOU are without doubt one of the sweetest souls in the whole world. I still find it amazing that anyone reads my scribbling. That anyone can actually find in them the beauty I see all over these pages astounds me. I feel as if I’m some sort of impostor and soon someone is going to toss me out for pretending to be a poet.

I’m glad you like it thank you so muchly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

15 posted 2002-02-02 08:24 PM

Margie darling sister of my soul thank you darling girl. I only wrote this because I was asked to try another style you may like it I still cannot see merit in it. However I know I am no judge at all when it’s my own writing So thank you darling sister

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

16 posted 2002-02-02 08:25 PM

Nancy darling girl Thank you darling girl thank you for all that you are and continue to be please shine ever on as you do so well YOUR work is an inspiration to me

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

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