Three Universal Words - A Seaside Rendezvous (A POEM BY MAGNUS)

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Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

0 posted 2002-01-30 12:53 PM

Magnus is dealing with a cranky computer tonight so I'm just posting this one for him....

The pounding surf...breeze from the east...

Lazy moon setting slowly beneath clouds.

Sounds of fog horns in the night, bells.

Lights of fishing vessels slowly moving.

A passionate kiss shared by two as one.

The warmth of passion staving off the chill.

Their thoughts of only one purpose, goal.

Love flows with the tides of a starlit cove.

Time stands still at this juncture in love.

The tick of a heavenly clock now silent.

Sighs of contentment matching the waves.

A moan breaking the rhythmic sea.

In the distance...a small cottage awaits.

The flapping sign on the knob calling.

Three words universal upon the door.

Three words known....whispering to them.

Sensing the moment...running, darting.

Chasing in mock anger and distress.

Dashing into the crashing waves, giggling.

Lovers dance a tune of "Can’t Catch Me!"

Falling to the sand, breathless, waiting.

Looking into the eyes of the other, knowing.

No spoken word needed to say they should..

Passions flame burning hot within.

The sound of a door shutting loudly.

Hurried steps up a flight of stairs, laughing.

Two loves become one, beneath a smiling moon

as a message wags lazily on the door outside..

Do Not Disturb...

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

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Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-01-30 01:15 AM

Magnus darling boy as always your writing is unique I really and truly love this it’s soooooooooooo very very good. The flow and the rhythm is utterly excellent. You know I love your writing this is definitely one of your best.

Thank you dear ‘Deer for posting it for him, because if you hadn’t I wouldn’t have been able to reply

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Chrissy
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since 2002-01-24

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Idaho, no I am not a farmer!

2 posted 2002-01-30 05:02 AM

this was amazing, It caught my eye and like as I was reading nothing else mattered, I was lost in this...Its truly amazing

Chrissy

Dance like noone is watching
Sing like noone is listening
Love like you'll never be hurt
Live like its Heaven on earth

HUGS AND KISSES TO ALL!!!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-01-30 05:57 AM

Magnus,
they weren't the three words I was expecting * soft smile*...but they were such good words.
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Startime
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Canada

4 posted 2002-01-30 12:08 PM

Oh my gosh....I got caught up in the vision of this poem...How very perfect and how surprising are the words at the end...and yet they are the perfect words.. I love the vision of this ... passionate and filled with the adventure of a loving couple...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-30 12:12 PM

Hey Barry! This is great and I LOVE those three words!! Sorry about your cranky computer and I hope it gets well soon!
Thanks Balladeer for posting this one...what a sweet guy you are!!

~Hugs to you both...Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-01-30 12:20 PM

Such a lovely viewof love....a delightful read....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-30 01:32 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, that was such a wonderful thing you did for Barry, he is a wonderful friend and poet just like you are to us all and this poem of his is wonderful! (big hugggssssss) We all love you both so much, sweet friends, you are delights to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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