Open Poetry #18 |
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From The Bottom Of My Heart |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
From The Bottom Of My Heart By: Noah Eaton 1/29/02 My love for you Is as soft as silk bathed in ivory You are my angel from my dreams heavens You are my Madonna, who I vow to worship truly This I promise you, my sweet lady love, to the bottom Of my heart, to forever offer you trust and joy always and To hold you whenever you cry and wash your tears away With unconditional love, to be yours forever and never Leave you, for you are all my heart desires, you are My Guinevere, who I will always offer my true Loyalty to you, treating you like the queen You are to my life, from the bottom of My heart I will promise you sweet Love always, fondling you With starlight and Hope always You and I [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-29-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, do me a favor, and save this for your wedding vows,whenever they may be. It is so beautiful. Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Noah, this is priceless! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
Very very Pretty Noah. The heart. Wow!! Wish I had thought of it 1st... She must be a sweet thing the way you speak of her.. How wonderful to find the inspiration that opens your window of creativity.. Jen |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
Wow..I mean WOW I am amazed...I mean this is WOW..Im speechelss Thanks Chrissy Dance like noone is watching |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah sweetie! You have outdone yourself with this one! A beautiful Valentine heart. WOW!! This must be so difficult to do... but it looks fantastic! You are a very very talented man! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
This is SO sweet!!! WOW. I love the heart shape to your poem, that's so cool. He he he. Great job. I love it! ![]() Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Noah when the day comes this would be nice on the wedding invitations...a wonderful confession of love...James |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is so creative Noah. I love it and I love your sincere thoughts! ![]() Nancy is right, you are so talented. You must teach me how to make a heart, because you know I get confused easily LOL! love, your guinevere ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Noah...this is absolutely precious. I hope you print it out and give a copy to your valentine. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!BRAVO!!!!WELL DONE, NOAH...THIS HEART IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT...I WILL HAVE TO TRY ONE FOR VALENTINE'S DAY....**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING, NOAH!!!! Joanna will love this. So much emotion and passion found dancing through your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This is so sweet Noah, To make your poem in the shape of a heart shjows just that much more of your undying love. This was great and a pleasure to read Noah, marvelous! From you good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Noah, You did it again, A lovely poem, a lovely heart...wow, fantastic. floria Floria |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You are a true romantic, Noah! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so pretty Noah, the words the heart on the page, and the heart in your chest. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Noah, Well done, you have such a great insight into hearts Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful..i almost missed this one noah..written from your adorable heart as always.. ![]() ![]() ~Vic ![]() You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Noah, whoever she is, she's a lucky girl. This is lovely, sweet poetry! Cor |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - my, my, my friend, how can she resist a lovely write like this. You did this very well, and the shape of the heart is amazing... BC |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Never stop believing, Noah, you hold such a wonderful heart inside of you. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
so clearly you allow your heart to divulge its deepest secrets for an even deeper love. PB4S |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Noah: YOU my friend are truly a wonderful poet! Bravo to you! ~Roniece~ |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,only one word for you.WOW! ![]() Juanita |
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juat shirl New Member
since 2002-01-30
Posts 8 |
The words in the shape of a heart show imagination. The words inside the heart show talent. It is a beautiful song of love. Shirl |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very sweet and the heart is awesome! |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
WOW. this is great. Can you teach my husband to do this? |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
A loving heart you've shown here, Noah, great work... ![]() |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, Wow!You've outdone yourself again.The shape of your words just touches the depth of your heart.You my dear friend are very talented. Peaches |
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