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From My Phantom Valentine Date
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From My Phantom Valentine Date |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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From My Phantom Valentine Date Dreams and visions I weave with ease yet in true romance I’m remiss My mind spins magic to appease but my heart craves a human kiss A phantom lover I create, still a man’s touch is my desire I want to go on a real date where he can ignite passion’s fire I think of this Valentine’s Day and what would be perfect for me A few simple things that I pray would fill my heart with joyful glee Flowers from my phantom lover inviting me out to dinner Just quiet time to discover if cupid has found a winner Soft touch and tender kiss we’ll share, of sweet nectar our lips will drink Then our inner senses will flare and into passion’s fire we’ll sink Just time for the man I adore, with some help from the hand of fate That is what this star does implore from my Phantom Valentine Date Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Here's hoping he shows up in time and that he's phantastic! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Best of luck!Theres not many of us left.lol.Very nice write! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hmmm Startime, maybe he will show up at your door. Better be ready just in case. Lovely poem. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Karen, now if you just lived closer... I have a few single male friends... who would be beating down your door!!  Nice thoughts here sweetie. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Done in great style as usual in the beauty that lies delicately within. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ah, sweet Startime, should you desire it, my spirit will always be with you. Just meet me over our favorite galaxy.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
Pssst, I've got a bunch of roses, chilled wine and matches, I'll see you at the opera house make real a dream or two |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Duncan....*giggling* now that would be amazing...**big hugs**  sodpossom....*grin* I need all the help I can get....He would have to come to me because I am much too nervous to go find him... floria....*giggling* oh gosh..I would love that...what a wonderful dream come true that would be. Nancy....Oh yes...I wish I was closer too...the men here are......mmmmm not romantic at all...too busy chasing cows to think of how to attract a passionate woman. D.L.Y.....Thank you...from one who weaves as well as you do...that is a great compliment. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
newell....Let's soar to the furthest rim of the brightest star and dine on stardust and ambrosia wine...**big hugs** mauddib....ooooooo sounds perfect...do the dreams come first or the wine and opera? either way it sounds wonderful to me...just what the star ordered...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
How about a double date..does he have a twin by any chance ~Vic |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* well I have to find the him first..he keeps fading away in the light of day...can't get him to stay in place for a whole day yet...If you happen to see a phantom walking the beach let him know I am waiting for him... and then we can find out if he has a twin...*giggling wickedly* no double date though...I have big plans for my phantom. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (01-29-2002 05:27 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Karen, you write the prettiest poems, I just love the way you rhyme so perfectly! Hmm if your phantom valentine doesn't show up, I say we just have a girls night out..me..you..enchantress..all of us!!!  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* mmmmm can we invite some of the guys here along for fun and games? Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karen This was marvellous, as usual. I wish for you a knight in shining armour on a white steed bringing you much love and happiness and a dozen red roses. May he surround you with his love and may you live happily ever after. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Karen, if I could wave a magic wand that phantom lover would be there tonight. ALAS! I lost my magic wand, it fell from the sky on our magic carpet ride, and someone riding a camel captured it and whisked it away to his mysterious harem. (Larry!!!) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sue...thank you so much...this would certainly be a dream date...*sigh* at least it is one that fills my dreams. **big hugs** Midnitesun...Go get him girl....we need that magic wand...don't let him get away on his smelly camel with it. *giggling* **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (01-29-2002 09:41 PM).] |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Where there is shyness there is no pleasure dearest friend...Drop the nervousness and go for it hun!!!!Great poem by the way...I still have you in my thoughts!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Startime I hope Valentines day finds romance visiting you...James |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
sure startime, we can invite some of the guys..my invitations go to mistletoe angel, magnus, and larry c...who do u want to come hehehee |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Brian...I will do my best to take your advice, dear man..but I have been rejected quite a bit you know...don't know if I can take getting pushed away again...**big hugs** James....me too but if not the dream was really nice...I too hope that Valentine's Day fines love in your arms, dear man. **big hugs** RosePetal....*giggling* oh yes, indeed...I like this party...how about we ask all the guys and gals of Passions and all the married ones can bring their other half...now that would be a great way to spend Valentine's Day and everyone would feel surrounded by love. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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