Open Poetry #18 |
A Really Bad Mood! |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
A Really Bad Mood! By Larry Chadwick I was in a mood, It was so intense. Without even a thought, It made no sense. But I was sincere, And oh so intent. I would make the effort, I would not relent. It takes a lot of focus, To stay in this mood. I was feeling surly And so totally rude. But I was determined, On that you could rely. No common sense today, That I would not belie. It’s actually quite simple, If you want to make it work. It isn’t all that hard, To really be a jerk. Just focus on yourself, Think of none other. And you will be alone, If that is what you’d rather. January 28, 2002 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling here, I enjoyed this much, as like the girl with a curl in the middle of her forehead, when I'm good, I'm very good, and when I'm bad, I'm horrid! I actually told one friend who had stayed long past his welcome on a bad day: "I KNOW you can't be enjoying the company!" Enjoyed this very much, Larry! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
serenity, Sadly this was me! Fortunately...it was long ago and far away. Growing up is such a wonderful thing! LOL Thanks. And about that company, naw, never mind. ROTFL |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's easy to wallow in the jerk mode or the 'B' mode for that matter, but it accomplishes nothing and we only harm ourselves. So get over it already!!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey...BluesSerenade, See above post...man, it's old news! LOL Too funny, such good advice and so late. Where were you when I needed you, huh? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awww babe... don't do that!!! (((hugs))) no need to focus on yourself... focus on ME!!! lol *smooch* (omygod... so many truths you speak in your writing.... god i love it!!))) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Geez, this could have been written by my ex husband....word for word. And guess what...now he is alone...and I'm much, much happier!! lol. Much wisdom spoken in those words Larry If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (01-29-2002 01:03 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
dor, For you...anything! From the one who owns the truth, wow! Thanks babe. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tracey, I knew he was a jerk! (Sorry I'm probably out of line) Boy do you deserve better. It is curable. But nobody can treat it. LOL Self-pity reaps its own rewards. Thanks. [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-29-2002 01:12 AM).] |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
Larry RARARAR!!! How could you ever EVER be in a bad mood, your so cheerful, and besides, Im here to cheer you up!! Thanks Love, Chrissy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Chrissy, Read some above posts that I made. LOL See...we can change if we make half an effort. And with friends like you how can I go wrong. Thank you dear one! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHAH I'm sure you're not a jerk Larry, and hey, if you act like one once in awhile, why not, other men do. LOL just kidding, nice poem. enjoyed it. floria Floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Larry, your such a sweetheart, I cant even picture you being a jerk. Then again, you say Im sweet and lots of day i'm a B! If you ever need someone to make you laugh, come to me! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
This pretty much summed me up.My wife thinks I am a selfish jerk.She just don't understand that I don't like being around people.Thats what I love about the internet,it allows me to be friendly. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
floria, No...but I was! Thanks for giving me a break though. L) Joanna, Stop it...B days aren't allowed. LOL Thanks. sodpossum, So your image here is a cover? Hmmmm. LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, we all have days like these where we are under the weather and feeling down; you are never a jerk to any of us but a very loving, compassionate, and sincere friend, and when we feel grouchy, we never intend to be a jerk, it's just we're trying to release our anxiety and it can take a lot! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Listen to you! Rant and rave, rave and rant. It's a good thing you outgrew that routine. But ya know, some people never outgrow that jerk routine. You should have heard me yesterday when my CD burner was not copying music as it should. Scritch and scratch and tinny noises. But I sure told it where to go and what to do with itself, and how to spin. Then I told my dog to stop bugging me and stop following me like a shadow. Then I felt awful, when he looked at me with that sad rejected look. Yep, some of us still rant and rave occasionally. Must be a full moon out there underneath those snow clouds. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-29-2002 09:39 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry This was wonderful and I just can't for a minute imagine you "chucking a wobbly" as we sometimes say here in the land of Oz. chucking a wobbly = losing ones cool/bad mood I hope you record that saying for future reference Larry. I have plenty of them. Take care mate......Sue Suetang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry in a bad mood??? Never!!! Just ask Nancy Lee ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
What a fabulous poem! Describes to a 'T' how I am feeling this evening. And thanks to you, it has snapped me back to reality and my lovely, charming, sweet self! :-) Surly - such a great word. Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* now here's a hug and kiss to get you right out of that mood...**big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, This is one of the few times I will have to respectfully disagree with you...sorry. But there times, as stated in the poem, when we get negative by choosing to only think of ourselves. If we make a concerted effort to change our focus it changes our mood. I had too many years experience not to know this. And guess what...I don't miss that attitude a bit. But love you for your thoughtfulness and always a positive attitude. That is worth a ton of respect. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey Midnitesun, I've been told to spin... But it wasn't directed at a person you love, close (the dog). It must be the moon! Thanks. Sue, Well...I used to chuck wobblies pretty faithfully. Got tired of 'em, so gave it up. Thanks for the edication! More...more. Thanks for your observations, matie. Nancy Lee, Get tired once in a while but gave up the bad moods...they suck! LOL Marti, The very purpose I hoped to serve...cool! Thanks, you made my day. Karen, Can I fake a mood to get some more? Thanks. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Larry.... Here's to all the world's jerks and guys who don't help with housework I guess that I haven't a clue why good guys are jerks when they're blue when their tempers become iridescent these good guys act so adolescent on their bad days they act so horrific even though we all know they're terrific but its hard to believe they condemn us each month when we suffer from PMS copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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