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Johnnie
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 27
Indiana

0 posted 2002-01-29 12:18 PM

if I had forever
I would love you until then
there is not a moment
that our love will ever end.

I have not been always
what you've needed, dear
take this time, this moment
read my words and hear.

Everyone should cherish
one whose always true
don't ever let it perish
their trust in loving you.

There's pleasure in a season
in wandering around
but darling, there's no reason
no other love I've found.

If I had forever
and no one really does
I would wrap you safely
in these arms of love.

So if you turn to someone
look into their eyes
just appreciate them
make them realize.

That no one has forever
a fool believes he does
don't risk the chance of losing
a true and faithful love.

[This message has been edited by Johnnie (01-29-2002 12:19 AM).]

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2002-01-29 12:20 PM

o yuh i know she has read it and i hope she enjoys all the wonderul replies you will get for this

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-01-29 01:09 AM

Enjoyed this poem...James

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2002-01-29 01:12 AM

awww so sweet! your wife will love it and she is sooo lucky! this almost makes me wanna get married

rp

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-01-29 02:52 AM

"That no one has forever
a fool believes he does"

So true. Say the words of Love today, for today is all you really have, until tomorrow, which will again be...today.
Thanks for sharing this Johnnie.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-01-29 07:33 AM

If I had forever
and no one really does
I would wrap you safely
in these arms of love.

You both are very special persons..
hold onto each other,
one never knows what is lost
until it is gone.

Maureen

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2002-01-29 08:12 AM

What a precious love song for your Kathleen. I’m sure she’s going to love this. I’m surprised she hasn’t seen it yet, or, maybe she’s just waiting to put her response in. And you’re so right, we don’t have forever, so we have to make the most of the time we do have, and cherish the one we love.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2002-01-29 08:16 AM

yes, I have seen it and it's wonderful.  My husband is very ill, none of us know how long we are going to be here, all we can do is give love openly and honestly and
make the other person contented and peaceful which is what poetry should do.  It's what people should do for the ones they love.

thank you hon and thank you all for your support and encouragement during the time I've been here.  I'll never forget it.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-01-29 09:00 AM

Johnnie this is beautiful!
Kathleen must be soooo proud.
God Bless you Both!
~Hugs, for the two of you, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-01-29 09:05 AM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet freind, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) I just know your wife will cherish this and your loving heart forever and fall in love with you all over again eternally, this is fabulous! We all love you so much, sweet friend, we all wish you the greatest happiness always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Johnnie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-01-29 09:48 AM

*sigh* so romantic...I bet this poem made her eyes misty....What a beautiful gift of words you have written for her. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

11 posted 2002-01-29 09:49 AM

A most sincere and learned write, Johnnie. My thoughts are with you and your family. You should write more, if it's something you enjoy...you seem to have alot of talent. Almost as much as your eloquent wife. lol

ShadowLost
Junior Member

since 2001-06-23

Posts 43

12 posted 2002-01-29 08:43 PM

Johnnie you made me cry....this is absolutely wonderful and I can tell Irish Rose thinks the World of You...as it should be.

Nice to see another poem from you!!!!

You have a fine talent!!!
Take Care
~ShadowLost~

[This message has been edited by ShadowLost (01-29-2002 08:44 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-01-29 08:54 PM

This is so loving Johnnie, every man should feel that way about his wife. she is lucky, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Johnnie
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 27
Indiana

14 posted 2002-01-29 09:01 PM

thank you, i just wrote it, thought it would be nice for Valentine day or something, thank you all for reading.

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