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Secret Lover
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Secret Lover |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Secret Lover You and I never meet by light of day, And when we meet in moonlight, we’ve nothing much to say. But in the heated dark we often lay, When imps of passion come to play. You and I share no common thread- We leave the sweet ‘I love you’s’ unsaid- And never hold hands over breaking bread. But we share untold fantasies in an unmade bed. When she is gone to visit, and he is gone to work, You’ll be outside my window, on a silent lurk. Pardon the sour twist as my lip upwards quirks- I admit it-I’m enamored of a jerk. Nan |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
ooops....*grin* this just has me grinning. I love the way you ended this poem. Wonderful writing that captures the imagination. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Startime, I can't help it. I meant it to be all passion and suchlike-a Marsha poem you know. But the more I read what I wrote, the more I thought 'what a jerk!' Nan |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Doreen, Thanks! Honest, it started out to be different, but I couldn't help it! Nan |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHAHA Nan, how truthful you are. I love this. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooooo delightful, sweet friend, your words always make me smile, this is such a truthful and powerful poem, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and you came to your senses before the end of the poem, too! sigh...takes me a bit longer, and grin, loved it!  |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Nan,thanks for the giggle this Tuesday morning.  LOVED IT!  Juanita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Floria, There you are, laughing at my pain. How could you? Dear Noah, Thanks-just a bit lighter than I've been doing lately. Glad you liked it. Dear Serenity, Thanks-yes, sometimes I can come to my senses before I even lose them. Dear Juanita, Love the Tigger. Nan |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Nan I really got a kick out of this! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear sp, Good! Nan |
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RavenSnow Junior Member
since 2002-01-30
Posts 16 |
Haha! I enjoyed this one Nan! Thanks for the smile RS "A conspiracy of silence speaks louder than words." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, at least you found out before you got too...ahem involved. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Raven Snow, Glad you enjoyed it-now it's your turn. I'll look out for your poems. Dear Kethry, Well, involved is probably not the word we're looking for. But let's just don't look too hard, or we might find it. Nan |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so well done, Nan...and unfortunately...is often the way real life turns out.  Maybe next time the frog will turn into a prince! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Lyra, Loved the picture of the frog. I made this poem up out of whole cloth. There's not a word of truth in it. I started out to write a 'Marsha' poem, you know, steamy and sultry. But I'm just not a steamy, sultry type, and the more I thought about it, the more I had to laugh. Nan |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Great write. I loved it!! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Nan, you are too much. I loved this and kept wondering when it was going to get mushy. I'm glad it didn't. I liked it just the way it was written. Can't take but so much mush myself. Cheryl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that's a unique love poem. LOL, I was expecting it to really heat up, and then you threw us a giant ice cube at the end. BRAVO!! Twisted love is still love. Isn't it???? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Glad you couldn't help it. This is too great! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks for the laugh Nan. It does wonders for the soul. Dee (Sarah) I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear amusemi,(I love your name), and Cheryl, and midnitesun and Duncan and Dee, Thanks guys! I love hearing from you. I really really tried to get steamy. Honest. But the more I thought of things to write the sillier I felt. I guess I'm not one of nature's Lilliths after all. sigh. Nan |
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juat shirl New Member
since 2002-01-30
Posts 8 |
I love the phrase, "fantasies in an unmade bed." It brought forth a mental picture. I guess that the reason the jerks are so good in an unmade bed is because they have had a lot of practice. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Shirl, I figure they're not nearly as good as they think they are. But since that applies to men in general (oh my! Did I say that?) about just about everything (oh dear! now I'm in for it!) I guess it goes without saying. Nan |
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