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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-01-27 11:36 PM


The Harmony of Us
By Larry Chadwick

At last I found you,
It took so very long.
I must have been lost,
When I heard your song.

It was so faint,
But it attracted me.
I had to know,
What could it be.

I followed the sound,
And there you were.
The day I saw you,
I knew for sure.

And when we sing,
It is harmony.
The two of us,
Our own rhapsody.

And now I hear it,
Almost every day.
It keeps me strong,
Makes me want to stay.

January 27, 2002

[This message has been edited by Larry C (01-28-2002 09:54 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-27 11:41 PM


Very sweet i hope that sweet melody plays forever in your heart may it also be strong in your hersÜ very nice write.

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2 posted 2002-01-27 11:43 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your romantic heart sings with joy in this gorgeous piece! (big hugggssssss) May love forever fill your heart with harmony, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a timeless gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-27 11:43 PM


mmmmm love is music to the ears! well done Larry (hugs)
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4 posted 2002-01-27 11:44 PM


Little White Flowers,
Welcome to Passions! Hope you like it as much as I do. When Sunshine finds you there'll be a nice surprise. You'll know what I mean. I just love telling on her. Thanks so much.

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5 posted 2002-01-27 11:45 PM


What a lovely harmony you have going there Larry. You’re both very lucky to have found someone to sing the tune with.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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6 posted 2002-01-27 11:45 PM


Noah,
A tune I'm glad you like. Thanks Noah.

Joanna,
You are so right. Thanks babe!

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7 posted 2002-01-27 11:46 PM


Tracey,
You couldn't be more right! Thanks a bunch.

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8 posted 2002-01-27 11:50 PM


Larry darling boy this is wonderful, you knew that for sure I’d say that. It is and I love it, also something you knew I’d say.

You do know one of my names is Melody don’t you? Mmmmm I just don’t use it much. So if you want to play a melody run your hands over my keys kid, and see how sweetly I respond to a light touch.

As always darling boy your writing is divine. And yes I love it love it love it.


What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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9 posted 2002-01-27 11:52 PM


Mushy,
Did I get permission to tickle your...hmmmm. An offer hard to refuse. Thanks!

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10 posted 2002-01-27 11:52 PM


Larry~

You  have a giving heart, and it shows in the words you leave on these pages....I can only sigh to this....


Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-27-2002 11:54 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-01-27 11:59 PM


Lauren,
You are always so kind in your responses. Thank you so very much. You are a beautiful and tender person. I like that.

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12 posted 2002-01-28 12:00 PM


Thereyougo!!  Love is a song that captivates us, much like the staying power that makes us want to sing it over and over again.  

Nicely done Larry.

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13 posted 2002-01-28 12:12 PM


BluesSerenade,
Ain't that the truth! Thanks.

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14 posted 2002-01-28 01:30 AM


meeting new people is great, but getting to know them...the them that hardly anyone else knows...now thats a treasure!  Great poem, you always inspire me, and make me smile.

Chrissy

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15 posted 2002-01-28 01:37 AM


Chrissy,
I'm just glad to know you can still smile and I got to put it there, cool! Thanks for such kind words. So did you hear from Sunshine yet?

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16 posted 2002-01-28 01:47 AM


Larry,
are you fiddling with my friend Melody? if so stop it this instant. Loved your music and it had good harmonics.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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17 posted 2002-01-28 01:51 AM


Keth,
Actually, there was an offer...but I prefer to trace. Interested? hmmmm?   Thanks.

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18 posted 2002-01-28 10:53 AM


Larry, how very sweet this was, I hope you hear that melody forever. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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19 posted 2002-01-28 12:30 PM


Larry this is so lovely!
Ain't love grand?!
I'll bet YOUR Nancy Lee loves this one!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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20 posted 2002-01-28 02:21 PM


Good work Larry.  You really have a gift with rhyme and meter.  You do it very well and the humor and light-hearted approach come across very strong.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

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21 posted 2002-01-28 04:25 PM


Hello Larry (or should I say Mr. Hopeless Romantic??)

This was wonderful and brought many smiles to my face as I'm sure it did to your lovely wife.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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22 posted 2002-01-28 09:54 PM


floria,
Thanks...me too!

Nancy Lee,
You bet...and she did! Thanks.

Canuckster,
Thanks...and I still haven't gotten over your silent but deadly poem. ROTFL

Sue,
Probably...but with a grin please. LOL She did and thanks. (It takes one to know one.)

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