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The Harmony of Us
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The Harmony of Us |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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The Harmony of Us By Larry Chadwick At last I found you, It took so very long. I must have been lost, When I heard your song. It was so faint, But it attracted me. I had to know, What could it be. I followed the sound, And there you were. The day I saw you, I knew for sure. And when we sing, It is harmony. The two of us, Our own rhapsody. And now I hear it, Almost every day. It keeps me strong, Makes me want to stay. January 27, 2002 [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-28-2002 09:54 PM).] |
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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
Very sweet i hope that sweet melody plays forever in your heart may it also be strong in your hersÜ very nice write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your romantic heart sings with joy in this gorgeous piece! (big hugggssssss) May love forever fill your heart with harmony, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a timeless gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
mmmmm love is music to the ears! well done Larry (hugs) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Little White Flowers, Welcome to Passions! Hope you like it as much as I do. When Sunshine finds you there'll be a nice surprise. You'll know what I mean. I just love telling on her. Thanks so much. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a lovely harmony you have going there Larry. You’re both very lucky to have found someone to sing the tune with. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, A tune I'm glad you like. Thanks Noah. Joanna, You are so right. Thanks babe! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tracey, You couldn't be more right! Thanks a bunch. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is wonderful, you knew that for sure I’d say that. It is and I love it, also something you knew I’d say. You do know one of my names is Melody don’t you? Mmmmm I just don’t use it much. So if you want to play a melody run your hands over my keys kid, and see how sweetly I respond to a light touch. As always darling boy your writing is divine. And yes I love it love it love it. What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Did I get permission to tickle your...hmmmm. An offer hard to refuse. Thanks!  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ You have a giving heart, and it shows in the words you leave on these pages....I can only sigh to this....  Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-27-2002 11:54 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, You are always so kind in your responses. Thank you so very much. You are a beautiful and tender person. I like that. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thereyougo!! Love is a song that captivates us, much like the staying power that makes us want to sing it over and over again. Nicely done Larry. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BluesSerenade, Ain't that the truth! Thanks. |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
meeting new people is great, but getting to know them...the them that hardly anyone else knows...now thats a treasure! Great poem, you always inspire me, and make me smile. Chrissy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Chrissy, I'm just glad to know you can still smile and I got to put it there, cool! Thanks for such kind words. So did you hear from Sunshine yet? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Larry, are you fiddling with my friend Melody? if so stop it this instant. Loved your music and it had good harmonics. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Keth, Actually, there was an offer...but I prefer to trace. Interested? hmmmm? Thanks. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Larry, how very sweet this was, I hope you hear that melody forever. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry this is so lovely! Ain't love grand?! I'll bet YOUR Nancy Lee loves this one! ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Good work Larry. You really have a gift with rhyme and meter. You do it very well and the humor and light-hearted approach come across very strong. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry (or should I say Mr. Hopeless Romantic??) This was wonderful and brought many smiles to my face as I'm sure it did to your lovely wife. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
floria, Thanks...me too! Nancy Lee, You bet...and she did! Thanks. Canuckster, Thanks...and I still haven't gotten over your silent but deadly poem. ROTFL Sue, Probably...but with a grin please. LOL She did and thanks. (It takes one to know one.) |
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