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Death in a Forest for Reasons Unknown (Magnetic Poetry)
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Death in a Forest for Reasons Unknown (Magnetic Poetry) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Dream when Spring Leaves behind A heave of finger Slung across The cool, wet, dirt The forest leaves A paper trail Magnetic poems Splayed on the ground Winter’s tail Still whips these parts A play whose language Precedes its cause “I’m the wind that strikes you down” Unseen his words Feel brittle now A mad breeze burns Floods frantic hair The skin of drunken need All will twist upon a course That nature slowly weaves Each poem lost Or burned for fuel A catalyst A need for more As dampened dirt From loss of blood Has finger Dig your grave I will find you and read your work… You who fell not far from tree [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (01-29-2002 07:15 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this struck a chord with me, Walt...it really did. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey WOW, I always love the metaphors of nature. Cool write.  |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
You have animal magnetism |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!This poem actually shouts to the world its message. Stunning. I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
walt, you have quite an imagination. I enjoy your poems thoroughly!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I thank you for reading me seriously |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your magnetic trail, draws me in, Walt...darn you had so many good lines here, I want to swallow them all and spit them out later in my own way...just teasing but this one sure tasted good *s yes I am a bit crazed tonight...'tis a full moon tonight..again M |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
OMIGOSH! Such images and thoughts..and WORDS! AND BEAUTY! It is definetely interesting to see what you can do with magnetic poetry, Walty! I love it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhh...your imagination and nature shines in your beautiful words, sweet friend, this is wonderful! I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhh...your imagination and nature shines in your beautiful words, sweet friend, this is wonderful! I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you all ever so much |
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