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Open Poetry #18

What Was I To Do

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

0 posted 2002-01-27 04:37 PM

What Was I To Do?

Lost in my own life, with nothing to do
Thinking of things mostly of you
Deathly kiss and killer smile
Eyes of steel, cold and vile
Love has left out the door
To return nevermore
It is unforgivable, sad and true
It's gone and left because of you
You closed the door and turned away
Yet you talk to me everyday
Seeming as if nothings been done
Laughing and smiling, having fun
I gave you my trust and it was nothing to you
I couldn't make you care what was I to do?

By:Tiffany

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-27 04:42 PM

Deathly kiss and killer smile
Eyes of steel, cold and vile
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Gee Tiffany...sounds like you may be better off without him. Well written with good imagery.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-01-27 04:46 PM

yes, this was well written sweetie. Im sorry that love has left you, it will return again when you least expect it (hugs)

RP

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-27 04:53 PM

bless your heart !!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-01-27 05:02 PM

Enjoyed the thoughts...James

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2002-01-27 06:03 PM

*sigh*...cant make someone else care lovey....

(gee..do i sound like a mom?? lol)

i agree with enchantress...by the sounds of this..you are worth more than this person can see..and you may be better off without him...

heres to a healing heart

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

6 posted 2002-01-28 04:41 PM

aww thanxz 4 respondin guys

Tifferz

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