Open Poetry #18 |
My Side of The Glass "#1000 FOR ME" |
Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I watched you chase tequila shots with beer a new one every time the waitress passed. Your choice was clear from my side of the glass. You grabbed the keys and slide behind the wheel, tires screeched as you turned the corner fast. Your choice was clear from my side of the glass. They pulled your battered body from the wreck although two others died in that car crash. Your choice was clear from my side of the glass. In tears I watched you yelling out "I'm sorry" In handcuffs as they slowly drove you past. Your choice was clear from my side of the glass. [This message has been edited by Lucie (01-26-2002 10:52 PM).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW, Lucie! You pack a punch with this one! From my side of the glass, you're a great writer |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Soooooo heartwrenching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and all who had to experience this accident, my heart is with you all! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! CONGRATULATIONS ON 1000, SWEET FRIEND, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-26-2002 10:57 PM).] |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
If no one else ever replys to this poem Balladeer.. your comments would be enough! Thank you for encouraging me always. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lucie...you really drive this one home! Fantastic write here! Congrats on the 1000th post! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lucie, congratulations on your 1000th. My Side of The Glass is a fantastic poem. Thank you for sharing it. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lucie...I don't think I have ever commented on your words before...Boy, have I been missing something... Excellent poem... Congrats. on the 1,000 mark...keep writing.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Congradulations on your 1000th post. This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There was so much said in that poem of so much importance, great job and congratulation on 1,000 for you too! <font face="monotype corsiva">~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lucie, come back more often, and congratulations. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I will ditto Balladeer... this is great... regards, sudhir |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lucy, Wow.. powerful is the first thing that comes to mind. You gave me goosebumps chickie Congrats on your 1000th post Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-28-2002 05:20 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I am SOOO against drinking and driving! When ever I go somewhere with my family/friends, I make sure that I drive if they drink. Nicely penned, congrats on 1000 posts!!!! RP |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!!What a stunning poem for your 1000th...absolutely magnificent. This poem is perfection. I love it...into my library with this one. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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