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Lucie
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0 posted 2002-01-26 10:43 PM


I watched you chase tequila shots with beer
a new one every time the waitress passed.

Your choice was clear from my side of the glass.

You grabbed the keys and slide behind the wheel,
tires screeched as you turned the corner fast.

Your choice was clear from my side of the glass.

They pulled your battered body from the wreck
although two others died in that car crash.

Your choice was clear from my side of the glass.

In tears I watched you yelling out "I'm sorry"
In handcuffs as they slowly drove you past.

Your choice was clear from my side of the glass.

[This message has been edited by Lucie (01-26-2002 10:52 PM).]

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2002-01-26 10:45 PM


WOW, Lucie! You pack a punch with this one! From my side of the glass, you're a great writer
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-26 10:49 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Soooooo heartwrenching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and all who had to experience this accident, my heart is with you all! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! CONGRATULATIONS ON 1000, SWEET FRIEND, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-26-2002 10:57 PM).]

Lucie
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3 posted 2002-01-26 10:49 PM


If no one else ever replys to this poem Balladeer.. your comments would be enough! Thank you for encouraging me always.
Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-01-26 11:06 PM


Lucie...you really drive this one home!
Fantastic write here!
Congrats on the 1000th post!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-01-26 11:11 PM


Lucie, congratulations on your 1000th. My Side of The Glass is a fantastic poem. Thank you for sharing it.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-01-26 11:12 PM


Lucie...I don't think I have ever commented
on your words before...Boy,  have I been
missing something...  Excellent poem...

Congrats. on the 1,000 mark...keep writing..

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-01-26 11:33 PM


Congradulations on your 1000th post. This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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8 posted 2002-01-26 11:49 PM


There was so much said in that poem of so much importance, great job and congratulation on 1,000 for you too!  

<font face="monotype corsiva">~*  Carpe' Diem  *~

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2002-01-27 06:30 PM


Lucie, come back more often, and congratulations.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2002-01-28 05:17 AM


I will ditto Balladeer... this is great...

regards,
sudhir

rosepetals25
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11 posted 2002-01-28 05:20 PM


Lucy,

       Wow.. powerful is the first thing that comes to mind.  You gave me goosebumps chickie     Congrats on your 1000th post

Hugs,
Tara


"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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12 posted 2002-01-28 08:59 PM


I am SOOO against drinking and driving! When ever I go somewhere with my family/friends, I make sure that I drive if they drink.
Nicely penned, congrats on 1000 posts!!!!

RP

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13 posted 2002-01-28 09:02 PM


WOW!!!!!What a stunning poem for your 1000th...absolutely magnificent. This poem is perfection. I love it...into my library with this one. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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