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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-01-26 06:35 PM

~Remembering~

I awoke again in the dark
Sweat revealing my pours
The moonlight has once
Again shattered the lake

The horizon walks with
Echoes, as the wind
Borders the night, it
Seems so endless

And where are you?

The child left behind
To walk bridges,
Trying to catch the
Reflection of
Diamond nights

Light can dance
In droplets of rain
But my hands are empty,

Right now
So much separates us,
I am humbled to your
Missing shadow
As the winter air sings

On Thursday nights
I sang to you upon
The stage of my long
Ago life, and watched
You smile my name
In "I love you"

I still see us
As beach lovers
Ankle deep in surf and
Sunsets, I return there,
As it reminds me of home

I just need your comfort zone,
I take a piece with
Me, the light upon my path,
A day will come, when
I again touch the
Untouchable...
Face to face...
Soul to soul...

Heart of my heart

I remember~

(11 years and still counting, I remember~ and I miss those days....as I miss you)

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-27-2002 10:57 AM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-26 06:38 PM

Beautiful memories you paint green eyes, soft and lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-01-26 06:38 PM

Greeneyes,
and in remembering there is life and hope.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-01-26 08:48 PM

And where are you?

The child left behind
To walk bridges,
Trying to catch the
Reflection of
Diamond nights

Light can dance
In droplets of rain
But my hands are empty,

============================
I still see us
As beach lovers
Ankle deep in surf and
Sunsets, I return there,
As it reminds me of home

I just need your comfort zone,
I take a piece with
Me, the light upon my path
A day will come when
I again touch the
Untouchable...
Face to face...
Soul to soul...

Heart of my heart

I remember~
==========================

once again you engrave words upon my heart...
this is exquisite L ... truly.
takes my words and breath away.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-26 09:00 PM

Lauren! You KNOW I love the way you write and you just keep getting better and better.
Excellent sweetie!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-26 09:10 PM

I still see us
As beach lovers
Ankle deep in surf and
Sunsets, I return there,
As it reminds me of home

lovely sunset beach images Lauren..hugs enjoyed as always

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-01-26 09:18 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous visions of nature and love you paint in your words, such beautiful paradise romance fills these words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-01-26 10:00 PM

Lauren,

Because I know you so well, I understand this poem and can appreciate what you're sharing. As always, your work is very sensual and your imagery both original and superb. *hugs* and peace, my friend.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

8 posted 2002-01-26 10:06 PM

This is very beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-26 11:05 PM

Lauren...Every poem of yours...such beauty.
Even the sadness is soothing in ways...I
feel the softness of a breeze over my face
as I count the stars in your words...Very
touching and wonderfully expressed..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-01-27 12:27 PM

Lovely writing...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2002-01-27 10:14 PM

I remember those days as well. . . and sometimes, I wonder. . . why. . .

well done my friend. . . you always inspire. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-01-27 10:32 PM

Lauren, you've painted a sad beautiful picture with this one.
Very delicately written...thanks for sharing it with us.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-01-28 05:08 PM

Thanks to all....very much from my heart...

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

14 posted 2002-01-29 06:34 AM

Again your words whisper to me Lauren. I am so glad I made myself find a minute this morning I have been away so long. Dear friend, if you need me, you know how to find me. Hugs to you...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

15 posted 2002-01-29 09:34 AM

Lauren,so beautiful and sad.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

16 posted 2002-01-29 10:02 AM

*sigh* such beautiful memories from your tender heart. Your words always toucht the soul and leave a lasting impression of gentleness. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2002-01-29 11:14 AM

GreenEyes~

On Thursday nights
I sang to you upon
The stage of my long
Ago life, and watched
You smile my name
In "I love you"

This is exquisite recall of a memory~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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