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Open Poetry #18

Cosmic Intrigue

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-01-26 12:04 PM

Cosmic Intrigue

For the Galaxy
You must have brought
Some kind of
Cosmic Intrigue

Pulled along by the
Gravity of the situation
Observing the play of light
The stars did burn me

Burned? No, gutted
Forever
Not visible to the universe
But
You know
By
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002
Jan. 26, 2002

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-01-26 12:12 PM

Pulled along by the
Gravity of the situation
Observing the play of light
The stars did burn me

So much truth to these words.
*enjoyed*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-26 12:22 PM

(sigh) Such dazzling imagery fills your words, sweet friend, this is a wonderful cosmic trip! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you words always make me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-26 12:26 PM

Wow I love your words here Zinsser. great write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-01-26 12:40 PM

Good write, I know the feeling.
Sandra

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

5 posted 2002-01-26 02:01 PM

Very nice imagery!

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