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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-26 11:15 AM

a lump
here in this chair
fuzzy brained
tousled hair
puddled thoughts
muddled as rain
dripping down
like some drizzled thinking
soggy socks~
wordless and stinking

deep within
a desire to be profound
yet vacuumed spots
echo back no sound

slumbered streams
flow and float away
carry with it
all I’d like to say

whispered morning
takes wing on blackbird’s song
filtered rays of ponderings
lifts the light along

evening’s serenade
bathes the valley floor
in rose and amber musings
how could I ask for more?

©January 25, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

1 posted 2002-01-26 11:19 AM

Vas,I loved this!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-26 11:29 AM

Yes how could you ask for more....and how could we. This poem is a masterpiece..there is a feeling of longing and then the words flow into the poem fulfilling all that is wanted. Absolutely delightful. **big hugs**

I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

3 posted 2002-01-26 11:39 AM

Very enjoyable read!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-26 12:35 PM

"deep within
a desire to be profound" Ah, yes, don't we want to be profound sometimes. Great poem her VAS really enjoyed it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-26 05:54 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, this is such a gorgeous poem of yearning becoming a dream come true! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your loving words always bring a smile to my face! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-01-26 06:15 PM

VAS,
this brought a lump to my throat for it is so like what I desire.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-01-26 09:32 PM

VAS,
Wonderful use of words. I love the image you leave me with.

Nan

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

8 posted 2002-01-26 09:36 PM

Enjoyed this a lot!

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-01-26 09:44 PM

Virginia, this is wonderful!
Left me with a warm feeling....that's good!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2002-01-27 12:20 PM

Hi Virginia--This is a wonderful poem, you know? I've missed you posting lately..glad to see you!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2002-01-27 01:58 AM

I liked, I liked!

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