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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2002-01-25 11:40 PM



I Wish, I Wish, I Wish


I wish
that you loved me
but no matter
how many stars
fall from the sky
you don’t love me
no not I


I wish
I could pretend
but what good
would it do
for even as much
as I could believe
it wouldn’t
make it true


and I wish
if I could
forgive you
for all that
you have done
but it wouldn’t
make you love me
no not none


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-25 11:49 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope forgiveness comes to your heart and you will again feel true love once more to last forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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2 posted 2002-01-26 02:38 AM


We are realy very much alike you and I...For  we want and wish for the very same thing........
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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3 posted 2002-01-26 03:13 AM


I wish, I could read this poem over and over again...so I've put it in my library.
write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Enchanted Melody
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since 2002-01-26
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4 posted 2002-01-26 07:22 AM


Hi there! This poem describes exactly how I once felt about someone.....I liked it alot...

God bless and take care

~Enchanted Melody~


sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
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N.C
5 posted 2002-01-26 02:52 PM


I wish I had wrote this because I too have felt this way.Very nice!
Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-26 03:06 PM


Oh gosh...do I ever know this feeling....I have taken the chance so many times only to be turned away that I am afraid to reach out and wish again...My heart goes out to you...I pray that your wish comes true...**big hugs** Keep wishing...maybe he just isn't ready yet but when he is he will reach out to you...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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7 posted 2002-01-26 03:09 PM


I wish for you that your wishes always come true with wonderful results, just as you wish them to.
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2002-01-27 01:51 AM


kinda like a childrens' song to dance to
amusemi
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9 posted 2002-01-27 04:18 AM


Lovely and very true to the ache in a heart that is wanting.  Very nice.

Just believe...

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-01-27 06:38 AM


I do lots of wishing myself...reminds me of an old song...Wishing and hoping and praying...I believe the final conclusion was you have to tell them how you feel...and if they don't share those feelings that probably will fall on deaf ears...James
Enchantress
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11 posted 2002-01-27 09:49 AM


Ah Helen I wish I could wave a magic wand and make all of your wishes comes true.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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