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Seeing You - Revsied
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Seeing You - Revsied |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Seeing You (Revised) Beneath this skyline of shared latitudes on opposite coasts, you sometimes appear, a gift, omnipresent. I see you in the clarity of a wintry night, in shifting constellations, the stuff of star dust, close enough for wishes, but light years away. From my earthbound perch on this ancient clay hill, I sense an outermost solitude, as if you were banished from love forever by some mythic god. Far off, on a rocky, isolated bluff, I see you, one hand shading aqua eyes, cursing your singular companion, Hope. © 2002 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (01-26-2002 06:38 PM).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wistful maybe |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very pretty! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Such a well-expressed vision, sweet friend, your words always have me looking around and finding perspective through the wonders of life and emotion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful writing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corrine, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Corrine...James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, with that powerful telescope one has to turn away or you might see more then my backside... course can't seem to keep these curtains closed...  Great sweet poet. Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies. Park, put some clothes on, will ya? Heh. Cor |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful imagery! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Corinne, you always have such amazing writes...must be all the time spent looking at Parker in nature's glory. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Sodpossum! Keth - yeah, the stuff of stardust! Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I liked the first version, but this is even better... Seems a little different then your writings of late... and it does speak to me, in some way. stuff of star dust eh... Now i'm really going to stay away from that window...lol.Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Just watch out for the falling stars, Park! Cor |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well written poems should spend more time on top Here you go!Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I missed this? Its becoming a crime for me to miss your work, Cor! I certainly do miss the old times in chat! This is wonderfully and delightfully what is on my mind these days, Cor..and you describe it all so beautifully! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Corrine,I loved reading it. floria Floria |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Okay, Park, I've seen you commenting lately, but where are your poems??? Cor |
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