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Open Poetry #18

my seat, made of metal

painly-
Junior Member

since 2002-01-18

Posts 10

0 posted 2002-01-25 04:29 PM

Another morning, not
So Halloween’ish, yet
Still filled with the same
Old men, and young girls
Sporting compliance.
Repetition is morally wrong…

Is this named friend, really
A name? Meanwhile hypocrites
Fall from venus.  Reminds
Me of Frankhenstien.  Feel, as
for what to put forward contempt!
On everyone seen makes even goats,
Question.  Where has that hair been?
For the barbers information its not
Appearing to appear.

I stand in this morning.
No I sit…

painly

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-01-25 04:47 PM

plainly done, good job.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2002-01-27 11:52 AM

~Interesting the way these lines keep drawing me to read and read again. Take care. *Peace.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-01-28 12:03 PM

For the barbers information its not
Appearing to appear.

Very interesting indeed.
I like how you broke from the norm,
whatever that is.

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