Open Poetry #18 |
The Temperature Of Lust And The Temperatures Of Love |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The emotion called lust and the long term one called true love. In the temperature of lust The steamy heat of passionate fulfillment exists In the sweat of the moment People intertwine into each other’s gratifications Using all their energies to satisfy each other Until the desire is spent by someone In the temperature of true love It exists at all levels of the spectrum In the coldness that puts each other’s arms Around each other in an embrace Those chilly goose bumps that run Through your spine in anticipation Of such a gentle touch The warmth of cuddling together To just hold the moments so special That you just lay there stroking each other Talking like children with a treat in front of them Of things so silly that only love could bring them out Holding passions within that require A long term commitment of obedience To the understanding of each other emotions It is the argue in such a way that it builds a relationship Instead of destroying it in the bruises that don’t heal It is about making up afterward in the way only lovers can It is about realizing the frailties in each other And avoiding the shattering of them For once broken a part of the puzzle will never come back Yes love is so much more That it would take a lifetime to explain And the words explaining it will take longer than the lust That started my words here My love of the written word Will keep me going down another trail of it Seeking the things to express the dynamics Of the relationship of my spirituality In the blossoming garden within my own mind My creations I unfold for you have been blessed on me In the creativity of creating an vision so vivid That it stays within your memory As in a smile that feel so much That it flies open into the skies of thought So go find your passions that will excite your inner being Into the carnival of rides That will take you to the pleasures of the mind Create the paths that will bring things to light And in the darkness See your path with the wise eyes of the owl For if the passion is true There is nothing stopping you Except lives final end D.Lester Young (01/03/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
quote: This says it all...follow your passions... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I want this........I am greedy and want the true love of it not just the fleeting passion of lust but the enduring love that is sharing of heart, body, mind and soul....on a level that overcomes the flesh alone. *sigh* this is very much a keeper and goes into my library. Thank you for putting into words my deepest desires. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hmmmm...and lust dies, while love transforms. (don't quote me on that... ) This one is worthy of its own discussion thread. Applause. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I want it all!Very nice write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, lust is something that we all burn with as we grow, desiring to love someone, but in using the beauty of love to win someone rather than lust, we can understand the person and in doing so one will grow happy and comfortable with one another and even through argumentation, love only grows stronger in the end as what isn't broken only grows stronger! (big hugggssssss) Ooohhhhhh...I dream of holding my love close to me so much, and I dream of sharing my Joanna all of this feeling of love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this!!! Each and every word rings true! Excellent write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Thank you for helping me live in light. |
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